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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN!!! dude... i can't w8 2 read bout' Sessy and the 'word'. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! GO RIN!!! neways... thx 4 keeping ur promise- and i can't w8 4 2marow!!!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U'D BETTER GET A COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER DAMNIT!!!!!!! hurry up!!!!! and, u'd better keep ur promise. ~.~
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on! hurry up! i love this story- i wanna no wat happens next!!!!!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I am really liking how straight forward Rin is in your fiction! Sexy! Wow! Pregnant her first time having sex! What a drag, but to have Sesshoumaru's baby...hmmm...Next chapter please.
I am really liking how straight forward Rin is in your fiction! Sexy! Wow! Pregnant her first time having sex! What a drag, but to have Sesshoumaru's baby...hmmm...Next chapter please.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that would be so funny if we can get a rosery for sesshomaru^^
update soon plz!!!
update soon plz!!!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha wouldn't be Inuyasha if he didn't say something smart ass about Sesshomaru and Rin.....I can't wait to read about the nine months.....keep going....
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going. I want ot know what happens.pwease. I know but damn people give her some kudos.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update pleeeeaaaase i really like the idea
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good lemon!!!!! Sesshomaru didn't waste any time did he.....I can't wait until the next chapter.......
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Agh, I hate it when people submit incomplete fanfics. Not just incomplete ones, but incomplete short ones. It's not even long enough to review.
You're doing a really good job so far, I just wish you would read over it and spell check it (found a few errors, which takes away from setting the scene for the reader) and maybe add a little more before cutting off and saying you'll finish later. There's so many fanfics out there, most people won't come back to a continued fanfic if it's this short. You have to really get into it to bother coming back for ever few paragraphs you post.
Sorry for being negative, this story really does have potential.
You're doing a really good job so far, I just wish you would read over it and spell check it (found a few errors, which takes away from setting the scene for the reader) and maybe add a little more before cutting off and saying you'll finish later. There's so many fanfics out there, most people won't come back to a continued fanfic if it's this short. You have to really get into it to bother coming back for ever few paragraphs you post.
Sorry for being negative, this story really does have potential.