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for Dirty Talk

by neffinesse

person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yay! Another one! Ooh, and it was so good............. *purrr* I can't wait for a few stories from now to get Sesshie on bottom, though. ^_^
person zzzz,,,
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story i liked it
person Dragon
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the love of GOD, I want more. I love you, so write more, please! *is begging here* All three is this 'series', of sorts, are extremly hot and sexy. You cannot stop now! We, the readers, will not allow it! *rawr*
person Orial
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEE!!!!! Nara/Sessy Smutt! Poor Rin, and Jaken having to deal with them on a regular basis. You'd better write more you!! ;)
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a fun game of yes,no.............yum sessy and naraku............yum
person Beachan18
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg *drools* YES!! ANOTHER FICCIE! i love u!

...naraku should stay uke >< i love him as uke. kudos for possessive sesshy! love it when he gets jealous! MORE JEALOUS SESSHy!
person Kugatsu
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're very cute together. Poor Naraku, yay sesshomaru.

I love reading these, they bring a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. well done and do please continue.
person Susanne
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot and funny! Loved the description of Sesshoumaru's growl :o)
person no name for now
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Funny and sexy. How I missed your stories. Another great contribution to the wonderfull world of naraku/sesshoumaru.
"You're a hanyou" "You know your place, don't you?" I so love this sesshoumaru.
person monkey5s
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AR AR AR! Another great entry in the series! I especially enjoyed this part:

Naraku bit his lip to keep silent. The game was back on, and damned if he was going to give this manipulative-- "Oh, Sesshomaru, yes...!" His inner resolve cringed and slunk away.

*****

I'm glad you wrote another. They bicker so wonnnnnderfully well! And the whole blurting things out, about having Rin kidnapped. What a wonderful pair they make. Thanks for writing this- we look forward to more, you know. It's like a sickness, isn't it?