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for Dirty Talk

by neffinesse

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* OMG that was the best series ever! Love how you made naraku. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Kiotana
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL HAHAHA! That's good^^
person dami
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol i heart this chapter! really good details and then ending was soo funny
person Withering Flame
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That was one of the funniest shits I have ever read, seriously. Do you know how hard it is to not laugh your ass of in a house full of sleeping occupants, really it's like one in the morning. I had to clench my fist and laugh into my hands sooo many times. Funny shit I tell you.
Kinky and Funny. Damn.
I advise more. MORE! It's like one of those narcotic drugs or something. Gahhhh! Three cheers for Kinky and Funny! Whoot!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Defense Attorney for the Clinically Insane
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutly fucking hilarious!!
I absolutly love the whiney bitchy version of Naraku.
And Sesshomaru is kinda psycho acting, and really vulgar.
He needs to say "fuck" and "whore" more though. Because those are the most awesome words ever invented.
These one shot things are AWESOME, but I'm sure you know that by now.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Tempestry
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this and the previous two stories! Yummers all around. I really like your characterization of Naraku, from the "cheerfully deranged" in the first one on. ^_^ Yum.
person nokomarie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very funny.
person Hanyou Slave
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I laughed so hard at the whole argument concerning Rin. Just like two kids. LOL Oh my, a jealous Sesshoumaru and he spent the night. Cool. It was awesome how Sess made Naraku scream and all the dirty talk. That usually makes me blush, but it seemed so appropriate. I do hope you have continued this. I would like a little more play between the two considering Rin is still in Naraku's custody. Off hunting to see if you've written a sequel. Tra lalala.

Awesome job!

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall