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for Returning To You

by kimisan

person Chigirl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good for Hiei, Kurama needs to get his head out of his ass!!! Plus are Kags and Hiei going to have another moment??? At first I wasn't sure if I would like them as a couple, but her cheerfulness and his dark personality kind of balance out. Kind of! Is the villian the Lord the killed to avenge Sango??? I gotta a lot of questions that only you can answer. As always begging for more!!!

Chigirl
person EatAPeach
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahoo! I love it! I don't think I've ever read a fic where Kuronue is the villian--very nice change of pace, indeed! Nice to see Hiei give Kurama some not-so-friendly advice, too. Speaking of Hiei...*insert shameless plug*...I'd really like to see you do a good Sango/Hiei pairing sometime. I love your work, and I think you could really put together a good one. *Gives you big puppy dog eyes* Please--just some food for thought. Anyway, on with the review--I really enjoy what you've got here and I can't wait to see more! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do not make Sango so weak that she immediately forgives, forgets and falls at the feet of Kurama. After Used and Discarded, I think it's time Kurama does some groveling and attempts to win her over. Good story, look forward to your next update.
person Chigirl
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!! Gotta love Hiei, I would have thrown Miroku down the well to!!! Please keep up the good work and update as soon I can't wait to find out what happens next. Will Kagome and Hiei finally get thier alone time, and will Sango and Kurama stop dancing around eachother? Please contine!!!

Chigirl
person EatAPeach
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated!! I was afraid you might have let this one drop, so glad to see that isn't the case. Anyway, great chapter! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see more!
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He's lucky all she did was hit him a few times. I think I would have broken his damn jaw. Dammit, these new sleeping arrangements are going to cause hell for Hiei making any moves on Kagome isn't it? Dammit, I say they toss Miroku's ass outside lol Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta feel sorry for Sango. Misunderstandings seem to be a way of life in that house unfortunately. Pity that Youko took her without a care for her feelings. The fox should be empathetic enough to know that she wouldn't look to him for just a quick fuck. Good chapter, please update soon.
person Chigirl
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow thank you, thank you, Thank you!!! I'm so sorry that I haven't updated, I've been out of town and haven't had access. Please update soon and I absoulutely love the story, I can't wait!!!

Love all your work,
Chigirl
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this should make things quite interesting. Miroku should have gotten stuck in the well for what he did. Damn baka. Kurama would be far better for Sango. Hope Kagome decides that she wants to attract Hiei's attention, I don't think she'd need to try to hard based on how he's acting around her. Good chapter, update soon please
person EatAPeach
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, as always! Keep up the good work, update soon!