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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that really worked out in Sango's favor, but I'm not going to celebrate just yet!!! Please update immediately, I can't wait to find out what happens to the whole group. Kurama and Kuronue were really close, so why would he turn on Kurama??? Plus does it changed the fact that Sango will still be raped? Hope so! Still begging for more,
Chigirl
Chigirl
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And you say I have evil cliffies LOL *Passes the crown back* I believe this is yours. Hope Kurama feels like shit, the baka shouldn't jump to conclusions like that, nor treat her in such a fashion. Hiei needs to get off his cute butt one do something about Kagome as well once this fight is over lol Good chapter, update soon please.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, it was very well done in my opinion. Hard feelings were certain to follwo with Kurama only hearing parts of the conversation. I can't blame him for being angry with her since he didn't hear the whole thing. I can't imagine how this is going to affect her later on. Good chapter, please update soon.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it hard to believe that Kurama could be that much of a prick, but I find myself enjoying his dark side a little. I now find myself begging you again! Begging for more!!! I'm such a glutton for angst and lust!!! Please update soon, I don't think I can wait to find out what happens next!!! Your biggest fan,
Chigirl
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh the plot thickens... You did well on the rape scene my dear. I wonder, assuming Kurama allows Kuronue to live after what he has done, how Kuronue will feel knowing that he harmed someone who pretty much had nothing to do with anything. Good chapter, update soon please.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to say it, but maybe it was a good thing for Kurama to do such a bad thing to Sango. *cringe* I know painful to say or even think about, but since the ones who took her are youkai as well, maybe they can be persuaded that she means nothing to Kurama and they can let her go. This is just a really sticky situation they are all in. You've got me on the edge of my seat. Really great writing style!
~Ralina
~Ralina
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, and the plot thickens. Good chapter! Poor Kuronue, being manipulated like that! But it makes me curious as to exactly whose pulling the strings. The youkai lord from the beginning perhaps...hmm. So many questions just begging to be answered! Good work!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Kurama's being a total dick! But I have to tell you, I find this rather refreshing. Too many authors have Kurama's demon side making all nice, when as a youkai it is his inherent nature to be ruthless and unyielding. So in that sense, you're doing very well with his demonic portrayal. Good job! I still think Sango should totally put him in his place, though! Anyway, great job! Please update soon, I can't wait to see more!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeks, I hope this story doesn't get too dark, I like it too much! Thanks for the warning, I can't read stuff like that. I'm looking forward to Sango going on a rampage. Beware a mad demon slayer! All she needs is a weapon and she's set **evil laugh** LOL Thanks for the break from my homework - my brain is definitely cooked, I want to go to bed, but I'm not done yet! :( Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading more!
~Ralina
~Ralina
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
owww kurama is being soo stupid how can he do tha to sango!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i m soooo happy ur workin on this story again i just ador readin ur fic please update soon