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for Returning To You

by kimisan

schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm very very tasty lemonade there. About time Hiei made a move on her, I was beginning to worry he had lost interest in her. I love seeing the tender side we all know he has but hides so well. Very good chapter, update soon please.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg they got mated but not to hiei n kurama omg i love ur story please please update soon is hiei gonna kill yusuke????????????? will this turn out to be a kur/san/kor fic please say it mite be ^^ please update soon
person Chigirl
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooow, one hell of a lemon!!! I think i'm going to start paying more attention to the Hiei and Kagome pairing!!! It's like Hiei and Kurama totally switched rolls, Hiei being gentle? Hard to imagine but you made me believe it, plus whats it going to be like for Sango since she has to share a room with Kurama??? Poor baby!!! Please update atleast once more tonight, and keep the angst and lust going strong!!! Queen of Misunderstandings!!!

Chigirl
person Chigirl
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!!! It's about time, thata boy Kurama!!! Please update soonI can't wait to see how this changes things!!!

Always begging for more,

Chigirl

schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have outdone yourself once again my friend. This lemon was perfect in length and detail, very nicely done. I'm glad Kurama's finally figured out what he wants. However I know that if you, the Queen of Misunderstandings, have your way things shall not be easy for them from here on out. If anything I'm certain that they are going to become even more complicated. Now it is time for me to go and earn my title as The Queen of Darkness and finish up the next chapter for Whispers. I shall anxiously await the next installement of your story. Update soon please.
person EatAPeach
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man, you do like to pile on the confusion! Will they ever get it straight (referring to the last chapter)? Kurama needs to get his head out of his ass, and Sango needs to just suck it up and demand an explanation! *Sigh* I have faith, though--they'll get it together. And I see Kagome and Hiei finally got their alone time--at least they don't have the misunderstanding issues. Oh well, great chapter(s)! Please, update soon--I can't wait to see how Sango and Kurama's night alone will go.
person Ralina
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter. I'm glad that Kurama finally is having some sense, now if they can just have a nice civil talk in the morning to straighten everything out between them... I liked how you got Kagome and Hiei together at last as well. They are such a cute couple. Enjoying the story immensely and can't wait to read more!

~Ralina
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mwahaha Let the bloodshed begin!!! I wonder if Hiei will attempt to at least maim Yusuke... Or, what Kurama's reaction will be towards what Kuronue did. It might make some difference since they were under a spell but I dunno how much of one lol Good chapter, please update soon.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?