rate_review Reviews

Good chapter. I liked it, though you made Miroku the bad guy (as many authors do). I think someone should make Sango cheat on him for once. Even though kissing another man IS cheating, it's outweighed by what Miroku did. And Kagome running off after she was attacked by those guys? Why'd you have her do that (besides the threat of a breakdown)?

Well, I'm sorry that I don't have much to say, but nothing has really happened. But I'll continue reading and I hope the story gets a bit more complicated than it is. Til next chapter... *wavies* Ja mata~!!

PS - Oh! One thing. The drink is called SakE, not Saki. The I in Japanese makes a long E sound. The E makes a short A sound. Just thought you'd like to know (a lot of people spell sake wrong. Dunno why...).

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl

You are awesome! I loved this story so much, and I can't wait to read the sequel! Great job!

Sorry, love the story and all, but Hiei and Kurama are idiots. Hope kagome and sango kick their asses.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Lovely lovely lovely ending. You have done your title proud. I wonder, if Yusuke got any such words of warning like Kuronue did. I wouldn't be surprised if he pulled him aside and threatened him aside from the brief confrontation. Good chapter, I look forward to the sequel! Update soon please.

Gah! Kurama finally gets sense than leaves her! Double gah! Yeesh! I am most definitely looking forward to the sequel and perhaps updates on your other stories... hint hint...? Eagerly awaiting more.

A loyal fan,
Ralina

Wow, that is evil!!! She shouldn't forgive him at all now!!! Although, Kuronue was possesed I still thinks that he has feelings for Sango. Kurama is such a dick, and so is Hiei!!! Those girls really need them and this is how they act??? God I hope the sequeal is up tonight!!! Your loyal fan,

Chigirl

i cant wait to read the sequel i just enjoy ur writing please post the sequal soon ^^

You have earned your crown that's for certain. Evil evil cliffy. Oh how the shit is going to hit the fan mwahahaha Can't wait for the next chapter *Evil grin* Update soon please

Yay, they're on good terms again...well, at least for the night. About time Kurama figured out what an ass he was being! Great chapter! Keep up the good work!