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for Poison

by Xakana

person Rawben
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn! that was good! poor miroku!!! is he ok now? what was up w/ his heart stopping and then starting up again? is he over it? ahh!
person Dominic Shade
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I really want this to turn into a permanent Sesshomaru/Miroku. They may not love each other like crazy...but they just seem to fit together.
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm so happy he's back, the only thing else i need is a miroku and sess lemon!!!
person Lady Gray
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, great plotline and good characters, can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh sooo gooood!!
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awewsome story and brilliantly written. You have such a poetic way with words which makes this story such a pleasure to read.
person crystaladept
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bounces in after re-reading Unforseen Obsticals for the three time.* Hiya hiya! Long time no see! lol. I'm gonna stalk you. heh heh heh.

Ch 1-5

Hmm... I really shouldn't expect less from you. *stands near the cliff and tosses a rock over. Smiles when she heard the rock hit a short distance away.* Not the usual cliffhangers. I like. I really do. Please write more. *Once again feels ashamed for not reveiwing when she had read it when it was just a teaser.* Um... I'll stick around and try to reveiw every chapter. *chains herself to a tree where she can stare at the cliff that has claimed so many other people.* Bad cliff... I don't like cliffs... cliffs are high.... height is bad... cliffs are bad... bad cliff... *continues to stare while waiting for the next chapter.*
person cas (2 lazi 2 log)
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O WOW! That'z the first time Sesshy ever used Miroku'z name! Impressive for some reason. Hehe. Sexy as all the other chapterz. Delightful. That was really hott. But Sess actually seemed concerned for Miro'z health didn't he? How cute. Heh. Oh the fever! What will you do now my luv? What will Sess do!? ~dramatic music~ lol Great chapter! I can't wait for more. You're doing awesum! ~thumbz-up~
person TheRedeemer
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's Great! Wonderfully Angsty. I love how Miroku was able to provoke emotional responses in Sesshomaru! Now I'm worrying about Miroku's health/safety, and whether or not his companions will figure out what's really happening.
person crazy
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i cannot wait until ur next chapter is up!