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for Poison

by Xakana

person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sess wants Miroku to want HIM and not the poison. This just keeps getting better and better. And still, so well written. I love the hallucinations you describe so wonderfully. Well, off to read some more.
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sess lied, but not just for Miroku. What would Inu think if he found out that Sess was fucking Miroku. LOL Wouldn't that be a sight? I don't know what to think about Miroku still wanting Sango after everything he has said to Sess. I wonder where this will lead. Great fic. The entire chapter was great, Sess taking care of both humans. Oh, and earlier, I loved the whole scene with Rin and the flowers in Sess's hair. So cute and sweet.

Snowfall
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* That is so sad. Sango took Miroku back and Sess doesn't want to poison him. *sniffle* I hope you don't let Miroku die.
person Rawben
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* i was! daaamn! good ending, but i still feel a bit bad for sango! damn! oh well... great fic!
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I just couldn't stop until the end. I really do like how you left it. Miroku will have the child he needs, and he and Sess will still have each other. Awesome fic.
person whirleeq
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you for ending this in a completely 'human' way... the irony not withstanding. That he continues on with sesshoumaru, like a thief in the night and yet professes his undying love to sango, has a family with her, etc. is just so very... perfect. Great job. Still, i would have liked to see Sango's reaction to that... bite :).

I have a sess/miroku fic too, if you're interested... not quite as poetic as yours, but since there are so few stories with that particular pairing, you might want to check it out :).

Thank you for writing this!

person bd84
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was well worth waiting for to read it all at one time. i surely would have fallen off those cliffs! XD even when you told me what happened in the story it still suprised me at what happened when i sat her and read it. i didnt see that faceprint you talked about though, XD maybe you can tell me where it it and i'll see it.

i did see what you were talking about when sess stole the story though, he did a nice job! XD

i loved the scenes with Rin and him being so fatherly. you did a nice job of keeping him in character in such an OOC thing for him. i could see those flowers falling out of his hair, its a MUCH better image than the one i got from suffer X.x and you know i loved the skimming rocks off of Jaken's head, and that i adore the fact that you made sesshy vampiric! *glomps*

you did such a good job on this, as always! :) are you going to make a sequel and tell us what their kids look like? *remembers offspring* that would work there though too. XD oh yes, please tell Xakana he did a great job at getting you to write this and update it quickly! my willpower was fading! XD
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was too amusing and funny. Sess flirting and teasing Miroku. I feel sorry for Miroku though. He's addicted and may never be free of Sess. Hehehe. You are as lecherous as the monk!

As always, well written and greatly enjoyed. Off to the next chappie!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Sess finally gave in a little. That was really hot. On to the next chappie. Snowfall
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. *pouts* but I don't like the idea of sango being with miroku after this story. Bloody brilliant. I hope you continue to write more stories