rate_review Reviews

Interesting . . . I like how you kept Sesshoumaru's overall personality incheck in chapter 1.

yo. i'm back! varry nice! varry nice indeed. it was well writen and thought out. i injoyed the ending but there mite of been one thing i would of done differently. good all the same. i don't have much to ad to what i wrote when i reviewed last but that i hope you have more storys that i can read and if not i hope you right more. " Sesshy i hope thing go good for you in the fucher." * kisses Sesshys cheek!* " Miroku my love! " * lach onto Miroku. " i wish you would of picked me insted of them!" * gives him BIG Kiss on the lips and runs off.*

WOW! i like it so far. i wish i could stay and read more but i have school tomorow and thus have to sleep now. i looke fowored to reading the rest. i like the way you are duveluping this reastionship. its odd but the frirs time i whent on a mir/sess serch i paced this fic over. i'm glad i disided to tack a look at it this time. i'm begining to wonder way i didn't look at it in the ferst place. i think that maybe i didn't read the sumery corectly or somthing. well its a good thing i didn't do that again or i would of missed out on a really good fic. well i really have to get to bed now so you will get more review when i finesh reading the fic. love it bye. love you to Miroku! * runs off *

I really enjoyed your story. I was sad when it seemed like it was curtains for Miroku, but you worked everything out in the end. Bravo! Wonderful and intriguing this story was. (^_^: sorry for that hint of Yoda, but you catch my drift) EM

Wow, that was... different.
So, at the end, Miroku stays with Sango but, also, from time to time, he lays with Sesshomaru...
I would never tell that final. I' accostumed to end the fic with either Sango or Sesshy, but I believe Miroku is more intelligent thanI am.
You Spanish fan.
VenusOfHeaven

Good, I liked it

I was listening to my iPod when I thought this song reminds me of this fic.
Ashanti- Baby(Miroku to Sesshomaru):See I can never feel alone with you
in my life
I'll give up everything I own for you
won't think twice
almost ashamed how I'm mesmerised
such a shame
I lose my thought lookin in your eyes
I know why
because your kisses make my lips quiver
and that's real
and when you touch me my whole body shivers
I can feel
now I can see how another life
another life
could have the power to take over mine
cause you're my
Baby baby baby baby baby
baby I love you
baby baby baby baby baby
I love it when I hear your name
got me sayin
baby baby baby baby baby
baby I love you
baby baby baby baby baby
Break it down
Baby I can see my worth
living here on God's green earth
you don't know what you've done to me
I never thought i'd need you desperately
it's kinda sick how I'm stuck on you
but I don't care cause I'm needin you
and how I feel will remain the same
cuz you're my baby
And when the world starts to stress me out
will I run
it's to you boy without a doubt
you're the one
who keeps me sane and I can't complain
can't complain
you're like a drug you relieve my pain
may seem strange
you're like the love flowin through my veins
ooh ooh ooh
keeps me alive and feedin my brain

Awesome, 5 stars.

I'm the one who raised her hand...

damn, how many chapters do you write in a week? This is crazy. Anyway, I really liked the way it ended (yes, I'm shocked) even though cheating on your futur wife is a very very very bad thing to do, it's okay because miroku and Sesshoumaru is hot! I shall give you lots of hugs because I like your stories.