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for Sweet Surrender

by inumom

schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it when her friends are cool with everything and are understanding. I'm wondering if Hojo is going to cause problems. Wonderful story.
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. I cheered(literaly). Wonderful job.
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story! although parts of it almost seemed like it was copied from your story Once Upon A Time.
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I discovered this thanks to your posting it on mm, where I recieved the updates of your stories. I'm glad I was able to find it on AFF, now that I can get back on again. I couldn't stand not knowing what happened.

This was well-written in the first person. I enjoyed every minute of it from Kagome's initial reaction to InuYasha's 'rejection' up through the wedding, honeymoon, mating, and even Hojou being carted off to the mental hospital (that was a great touch). I also had to laugh as Kagome considered the possibility that she was her on ancestor. As always, your lemons are hot and romantic at the same time. I look forward to reading more of your work.
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've only read up to chapter 11, then I had to stop cause I was forced away from the computer, but I love this story!!!
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, such a wonderful story. This is the first full fic I have read on this site. It was sweet and romantic, I hadn't expected such ah.. love scenes. A couple of one shots from other authors on other sites were harsh and kinda weird, but every chapter you wrote was beautiful. Please continue writing! And if you're going to be doing a sequel (though i don't know how, this story had a fantastic ending ;P) or adding extra chapters, I'll be sure to keep checking up!
person EvilKitten (not signed in)
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! *Stands up and applauds* Your story was marvelous! I was blown away by the great detailed imagery and I love the fact that you made the sex seem not so dirty... (Even though some of us like it that way). I even liked the first person aspect of it, which is surprising because most people who write them dont even get the details right. You are a very gifted writer and who cares how old you are? Doesn't that make you wiser or something? *Smiles* Thanks for taking the time to write it. It was most enjoyable.

Kit-en
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Engenious peice of work.
person MJ
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rule! I can't wait to read what you write next.
person kikyopleasediesoon69
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea i know i commented already but i had one thing to say..i dont think InuYasha would really call her "love" all the time like that