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for My Mates

by Blayze

person Kiranta
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O__O Oh kami. This has certainly caught my attention. COnmtinue this, and I never knew how kinky Kagome could be ~_^
person Quiet One
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea here. Looking forward to reading more.
person Mandaz
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This was great. And well worth the wait, even if I DID complain. =P

But there was one paragraph that sent me into a hysterical fit of laughter, and I don't really know why:

"The sight of a naked Kagome would not have been of much concern to Mrs Higurashi, since it was summer and therefore she would understand if her daughter decided to go nude in her room. The sight of Inuyasha in Kagome's room would not have been of much concern to her either, since he seemed to have feelings for her daughter. However, the sight of Inuyasha preparing to lick a naked Kagome's vagina? Well, that was something else."

Maybe it's just 'cause I'm sick minded. But I don't know. I almost fell out of my chair after reading that.

You better come out with chapter 3 soon. I'm sick of waiting. =P

Haha. J/k.

-Mandaz
person Angel_shae
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely hot. Please continue, I would love to see the interactions between Inu and his mates. Not to mention how he'd react to Miroku and Kouga finding them in that. . .position.
person let
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome i'm really looking forward to next update!!!!
person Pyro
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I think that your plot rocked and that I love reading My Mates.
person Backlash Wave
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I love this story. It could have done better without Kagome. But I just don't like her. Make more stories like this please.
person You don\'t need to know
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really really like this fic... the other males just don't deserve the girls.... 'cause they are too gay
person Michael22
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Story is definely a interesting one but it's good. Wonder what inyuasha is thinking right now huh. Anyways great job and ubdate soon please.
person Inu-Shinta
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love stories where Inuyasha has more than one mate. Would you please consider writing one more chapter where they all make love/mate in Kagome's era?