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for Emergence

by inufan625

person kashudoreineko
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is definitely within the top 10 Inuyasha stories I've ever read. I'm not going to tell you where in the top ten it's ranking - I wouldn't want you to get a fat head.

BUT, I will say this, only about three fanfic stories I've ever read have made me sob uncontrollably. And this one did.

I hope you continue this story.
person chanda
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until the next chapter.... Its still really good, yeah she starting to remember.

person Bree
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a hard time reviewing this fanfic because I need a thesarus just to look up new words to decribe how good it is. With or without a lemon, the romance you have included in this fic make it a wonderful read. I'm glad Kagome is finally home and that Inuyasha told her their past history. I'm wondering though since Kagome didn't remember the shrine as home if she's going to see the past as home. I am also wondering if you're going to bring Kouga into the fic. It would be interesting, with Inuyasha's new found confidence in his feelings for Kagome, to see how he responds to Kouga now. Will look for your updates to see how it all plays out. Keep up the good work.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so much... But I have been pondering several questions for a while now... Since I read the chapter about the male therapist... How is Inuyasha and Kagome going to be when Miroku goes to grope her? Will Inuyasha lay it down for Miroku? (Please I would like to see that.. Inuyasha telling Miroku to keep his hands and hentai ways to himself... But you *sighs* dramatically are the Authur ) AND A PRETTY DAMN GOOD ONE AT THAT!!!!! Will he tell them about the therapist? Or will Miroku just grab her ass and then the truth comes out? Also what has happened to Kikyou? Is she still Undead? or really Dead? And Naraku? Have they fought and won the battle against Naraku? Will these answer be in future chapters? I really love your story and the way you have the characters evolving ( I wouldn't tell Kagome about the command yet either) Will Shippou be making an effort to improve his realtionship with Kagome? All this and so much more... I love stories that get you to sit back and think about things for a while... YOU ARE TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!! Look forward to next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cathy (aka doggieearlover)
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story! I'm so happy he finally told her everything and can't wait to see what happens.

Cathy
person SoutasSister
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Keep going, please.
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Took a couple of hours off to read this.
It's really good and original. I love fics
that show InuYasha opening up & changing.
It's a refreshing change.
person Inudaw
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story.. I like how things are progressing, but not moving that fast. Makes it believable. Can't wait for an update. Back to reading. ^^:
person smurfsicle
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.. that was a really good chapter! I loved the part with the stars :D keep it up and update soon!
person Starfury386
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. I think you've gotten better and writing because I'm enjoying the story even more than I did your first. Please continue to update!!!