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Love the story. Just came home from a very long time in hospital and got a chance to read this in full. (only been able to catch bits and pieces) The whole story was entrancing, and the way that Inu and Kag worked together was great. I will really hate to see this story end. (even though I know it will happen) I eagerly await the next chapter. TTFN! Lady Banshee 999

I loveed it.You rock email me.

Sorry, that I am late getting on board here. I have just spent all morning reading all 14 chapters. Your story is really wonderful. It has a really graceful execution of Kagome's and InuYasha's relationship. In other words, I really like how the story progresses with InuYasha becoming more open with his feelings and Kagome's never questioning faith in InuYasha. Keep up the good work (I love this cliche'.) Cynbad146

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you!! THANK YOU!!!!!! I think you are the first writer I have come across where as the relationship progresses that it is Inu Yasha who is the voice of reason!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He stopped the rushing of their relationship to the next stage AND he explained why in such a way there was NO miscommunications!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Other writers would either have Kagome stop and there would be a huge fight and insults because Inuyasha would want more or Inuyasha would stop it without explaining why properly again causing lots of hurt!!!!! And what you did with Koga (although I would like to see Inuyasha kick his mangy butt big time) how you handle it was brillant!!!!!!!!!! A very pleasing and refreshing touch/change!!! You absolutely ROCK the Country!!! GAH!! I just wrote a Shania Twain lyric... LOL!! I like Shania.. OK ramble done... SWEETTTTTT!!!!!! I really don't know how to express in proper words the honour I feel to be able to read your stories!!!! I only have one regret... That this and your other stories can't be published ( Seriously... I would buy at least 3 copies of each.. one to read one to place into a treasure cabinet and one for back up once the reading copy falls apart from over use) WOW!!! KUDOS!!!!!!!!! I like how you had Kagome's Mom talk with Kagome about her progressing relationship with Inuyasha. That was, how I felt, in character with her, and tastefully done. I have come across some writers that have her mother pushing her to have sex and get pregnant right away. I wonder will Myouga show up and give some "helpful" ( meaning embarrassing ) points on demon matings/cermonies? and Sesshoumaru!! giggles I can't for him to show up!!!! Again I thank you for writing and allowing us the joy of reading your story. Please keep up this most excellent work.. And update as you can. Inu Hanyou Nikkie will be chasing her tail, munching on Pocky, and generally showing off her puppiness as she awaits the next chapter...

You ´re doing it so well please update soon..don´t make me suffer a week! ;_; I love your story..really

I am so glad you updated this again so soon. You sure packed a lot in one chapter. It sounds like Kouga finally got the message Kagome loves Inuyasha. I felt sorry for Inuyasha that Kagome was able to restore her memories of her family but not him. I hope if she does remember, she and Inuyasha are able to continue having the more mature relationship you're establishing between them and don't fall back to the screaming matches. I thought it was funny that Kagome's mother had to give her the "birds and the bees" talk again. And then Kagome turns out to be the aggressive one in the relationship. I really enjoy this story.

Don't be too disappointed by lack of responses. Since you updated at a different time than normal, some may not have found the updated story yet. I actually found this update just as I was about to turn off my computer for the day. I'm only following four stories on AFF these days and all of them have regular updates. I feel that those authors who update regularly know their stories and where they want to take the characters and their readers. That's one reason I enjoy this story. You keep me on an emotional roller coaster with it. I'll be looking for your next update (and won't just look on Tuesday morning for it).

Now you know we are all lazy and just take enjoyment from your story and then think, "I'll review next time..." Well anyway, I'm still here and I'm still really liking your story and I'm still hoping you update again soon!

And if you post on FF.net, they had some power outage problem that kept them from updating the reviews. You might have more than you think. And on Mediaminer, they reset everyones default to not allow unsigned reviews, so you have to go into your settings and manually change it to accept anonymous reviews. I hope that helps.

hahahaha! Great chapter! The relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha is coming along quite nicely *nudge nudge* Poor Kouga, got shot down, but i'm glad you got that little situation out of the way now. Also, the way you portrayed the reaction of Kagome's mother when she walked in on them was very good! Gentle and understanding, you got that characteristic of hers down to a T. This story is one of my favorites and i'm glad that you continue to update, even if it is just weekly! ^_^ and ... hahaha, thank you for your recognition, it's really kind of you. i like reviewing, and i think all stories and their authors deserve that much, so no need to thank me, your story and updates are all the thanks i need! ^_^ Can't wait for your next chapter, so til then, take care!
lith*

WooHoo!!!!! Another update!!! I love that I just found this story and get update..update...poof, like that *2 snaps* ^_^ and ending on the juicy.....yummmmmmmmmmm!!

hi, im finished reading the updated chaps, its reaaally good,CONGRATS :D:D but dont u think kags sould remeber EVERYTHING, dont u think its too sad to make kags forget all she's been through with dogboy? dont u think its too sad to forget a part , a BIG part of you life? just try to think about this, she should be able to remeber everything , even about kikyou, and then , even though after having remembered the sad, harsh, and stupid things that dogboy said, that had happened and the good ones too, she'd still chose to stay with dogboy!!!! isn't this way more romantic, beautiful and not so sad and radical??? anyway you story is wonderful, i just don't like the goodie-goodie way you make the clay-woman act buuuut...nothing is perfect right? kisses ;***