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hiiii, excellent, excellent, wondeful, you good, you really good writing!!!!!!!keep going, and thaaaaank you for writing this splendid story :D kisses ;**

Excellent piece. I have really enjoyed it a lot. I think that you have done a great job of capturing the uncertain gentleness that is Inuyasha hidden personality. I also like how you have done Kagome's character -- Even without her memories she is the same base personality. I thought that the scene where she lays her head on his lap and he pushes her off was especially good. I can see that being right out of the manga.
Kgome's mom was an angel. The scenes where she is helping him learn to read were great. I can see the mama of cannon doing that for him.
I don't generally like Kikyou in fanfiction. People make her either too evil or too much of a goodie-goodie. I think that you have done well to balance her out so she isn't too perfect, but just human. And a human that love Inuyasha at that.

Once again, great piece, and thank you for writing for us. I look forward to reading more of this piece.

Caitriona

BTW - The comments in you AN's where you say the more reviews you get the more 'excited' that Inu gets have really cracked me up completely! All I could think of was that TV commercial with the dog and the beggin strips. Only change the dog to Inu and the Bacon to "reviews!"

omg what a sweet story! ^_^ ::cries:: love the plot.im SO ready to read more of it sooooo update ASAP pwease? ::puppy dog eyes::

YAY! More story.
So so cute, too. I love how you get Ayumi & Hojou together.

I have to admit having Kagome heal Kikyo was a stroke of genius. What better way to make everyone more comfortable with everyone.

More???

Once again, another beautiful chapter. Aww, i'm glad you went easy on Hojou in this story and got him a date! Ayumi and him would make a really nice couple, as for Eri and Yuka. Damn straight, they got what they deserved.. or at least Eri did. The whole scene with Inuyasha telling Kagome that she didn't need the wig was very sweet, i really love the bond you have created between the two. So now, until ur next chappy!! take care ^_^
lith*

Really enjoyed that chapter. Kagome's friends are just like high school girls I've known. I also liked how you handled the Hojo situation. He seems to take more than his fair share of abuse in fanfiction. By the way, I thought you portrayed Kouga perfectly, pushy, dense, but willing to stop what he was doing for Kagome's sake. Look forward to your next update.

I read the latest chapter this morning but didn't have time to review. It's great as always. Keep them coming.

so far its been good because you unlike most people make a story last longer and not just make a one shot .please try to make an update soon.

rawr... haha more! i absolutely love this story!! keep it up!!

I usually save reviews till the end of a story...that way I can review a story for an author, not just a chapter. I usually get angry when authors demand more reviews or they will "punish" the readers by delaying further chapters. I'm feeling unusual today. :-) You really are writing a great story here. It keeps close enough to the original to be easily understood, but you've added a new flair to it that I really am enjoying. You've handled the characters well, you've led us all through the story gracefully. You really should keep writing. Thank you for sharing your story with us all. I'll review again when the story is done. Please never feel discouraged when you don't get as many reviews as you would hope for, I'm not the only one who tends to wait until the end to review. I'm sure there are many others just waiting to see where you take us.