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by inufan625

person Bree
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. The in-depth analysis Inuyasha gives Kagome of why she should remember showed a wisdom that few people acknowledge that he has. I like the patience he is showing, like he is getting his impulsiveness under control. The lemon was very well written, it felt fresh and not contrived as a plot device. I thought the mating rituals you came up with were wonderful. A species that mates for life should bond body, heart, soul. Very well done. Looking forward to more.
person J
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is a beautiful chapter you wrote. Thank you for writing it and for them finally being mates. This story so far has been written wonderfully. Thanks for everything!! You're an exceptional writer. I'm a big fan of all your stories. Please keep them coming.
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and very well written. I hadn't reviewed anything in a long while, life just gets in the way sometimes. I love the way you keep InuYasha's and Kagome's relationship very real, not too sappy, that gets kind of old, but this is really good. Anyways, Keep up the great work.

Ja ne!! ^_^
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerfect, this new chappy was more than perfect!!!!keep moving on, and btw when you goin' to put the lemon???hehehe :D kisses ;**
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter.. One that has made me even want to sit down and think... Damn thats good!!!! I like how Kagome has remembered that day and her reaction... so very vivid.. So very much in character. I like how she explained to Inuyahsa that she still loves him very much but needs 'personal health day' to sit back and reflect then move on. I enjoyed how Inuyasha true to form had a panic attack and told her. VERY EXCELLENTLY DONE!! Bravissmo!! Bravi!! Bravi!! I feel that when this story ends (bawls) That there will a standing ovation for you!!!! Like how you had Sesshie come into the picture!!!! Bows before the Goddess of Most Excellent Wrinitg..... Can't wait for the next instllmnt.. (actually can.. Allows me to re-read every chapter!!!) SMILES and BEAMS with joy!!!!!!!!!!
person Bree
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sure like this sweet and cuddly Inuyasha you have developed since the accident. I hope Kagome remembers some of the good times she had with Inuyasha before the accident so she understands why she fell in love with him in the first place. Another very good chapter.
person chanda
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I have been busy.. so tonight I caught up....

Great four chapters....lol I loved them all...Koga, the carnival, Kagome telling her friend off that was funny she deserved it and Sess showing up making Inuyasha one rich puppy...lol

look forward to Monday...
Chanda
person lithium88
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet again, another beautifully written chapter. I'm glad that you finally had Kagome remember the incident that got her to where she is now, it gave depth into everything. I'm really intrigued with the whole scene containing Sesshoumaru in it, I can't wait to see what happens between the 2 half-brothers. As for the time apart that Kagome needs from Inuyasha, it's understandable. Sometimes you just need to be alone to figure things out, I only hope that if she does continue to remember everything, it won't hurt either one of them.... too much. Sometimes ignorance.. really is bliss. Once again, another great chapter! Continue your updating, and until your next chapter.. Take care! ^_^
lith*
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVING the story BIG TIME!!!! THIS is GREAT!!! WOW!!! another great chapter (chapter 15 ) though I am a little confused and lost by what exactly Inuyasha was telling Kagome when he said “I meant to tell you that friend of yours... She don’t want you to be with Hojou because she doesn’t like me.”... I wondered if you could explain what he was trying to say... was it Eri wanted Inuyasha for herself? She wanted Hojou for herself? She doesn't want Kagome to have anyone because they have to meet her expectations? Was Eri trying to make it seem like Inuyasha can go from girl to girl in a heartbeat? I was confused ... sorry...I left you my email so if you are able to write me please do so.. But other than this you totally ROCK!! I hope that there will be more interactions between Kagome and her meddlesome friends ... Oh yay... Nikkie is looking for seeing them get put into there place even more!!! I can't wait for your next update!!
person smurfsicle
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! and boo! awwwe inuyasha looked so pityful! poor thing and poor kagome.. is she ever going to remember everything? please update soon!!!!