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I'm just testing.... yes, it seems like the review system is working again, thanks for updating and good luck with your wonderful story!

awww. very kawaii. yay for the couples gettin together!!! hehe. very well done. i did notice one thing that really threw me off, just a grammar slip, but back in the chapter when eri (or was it Yuka?) pulls inu into car with hre then was all over him...when he's telling Kagome about it, he makes reference that she wants kags to go with hojo because she wants inu...but you added in doesn't want...if you want, email me and i'll bring up the exact qoute. i'm to lazy to lose the entire review to go back and pull it up. gomen nasi. anyway, great story, really love it!!!!

I must say that for the most part i thoroughly enjoyed this story. I always like a good old fashioned inu/kag story. I felt that your story is well written and fluid. I dont always believe the words or actions of the characters, meaning that i dont always believe that would they are saying or doing is true to Takahashi-san's version of the characters, but it is a minor thing. Im glad that you stick to what you know and work well with: their relationship. I like that you tok a while to get to the sex. I'm sorry that this is my first time reviewing, but i only started reading this story a few weeks ago, and i just finished ch. 17. I look forward to your next chapter.

woo hoo wonderfuuuul!!!!gorgeus, splendid :D:D:D reeeeeeeeally good hehehehe!!!! just nothing to complain, it was perfect, the whole chappie :} :} kisses ;**

woohoo! great story. I like your variation on the marking thing - i repeated theme on this site, but you spun it well into your story and gave it an original touch. I've said this before, but I like how your writing has progressed... although, a little proffreading wouldn't hurt! And just so you know, it isn't painful for every woman when they first have sex - this is another theme repeated in this site, but i'd like tot hink it's more of a symbolic thing, like kagome is giving him everything, and is only his, etc. But of course the important thing is how you work the inuyasha/ kagome relationship, and it has only gotten better. Anyway, please keep writing. Your own feelings really come through and all of your stories make for a great read.

wow... just wow... ths has been an amazing story! if this is the last chapter, please make a sequel!!! I have loved this story form the very start, keep up the good writing!

Loved the story! Once I started reading I couldn't stop^_^ I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Wow!!!! YAY!!! LEMON!!!!!! By the way, that is probrably the bestest most romantic lemon I have ever read on AFF.net. And again just WOW!! Arigatou, Ja Ne!!!

THAT was PREFECT!!!!! NO that was BEYOND prefection!!!! Chapter Seventeen!! That was beautiful, tender and exquiste. NOW THAT WAS A LOVE SCENE!!!!! I really enjoyed it and I loved how you have done something different with the markings. That was a real treat!!! Thank you so much!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Loved how you have Inuyasha going to Myoga and Kagome going to Sango about mating rituals. This just totally rocks!!! Will there be a flashback for the battle with Naraku? I kind of got a craving for a nice battle/fight scene. What can I say I'm a girl that loves a good fight evey now and then.. Keep up the most excellent work!!!!!

One of your best chapters yet. ^_^ This story has really come a long way and i'm sure it still has a ways to go. This chapter was beautifully written, and i'm glad you posted it up when u said u would. I really can't say much about the chapter, i guess you could say i'm left speechless? Anyway, wonderful job, i can't wait to see what else you have in store for this couple but i'm sure it'll be great. so until your next chappy, take care!! ^_^
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