AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Emergence

by inufan625

schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!! You are an amazing author and I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I cant believe Eri though!! She makes me so mad...lol.
person PJ
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update. I tell Eri just really, really needs to get a life of her own and quit trying to push her way into other peoples. I am glad that she had been talking to someone that would know if Kagome was or was not pregnant... and that she was mated so to youkai it didn't matter if she was married in the human way. I wedding was great and what they said during the ceremony was lovely. I bet old Eri will ba surprised when Kagome doesn't have a kid. She won't be having one anytime soon will she? I mean she won't be getting pregnant on the honeymoon will she? I think it would be nice if they got some time more time together plus they need to find the last shard I would think they would want to wait until after they find it. I mean look at how they decided to not have Sango/Miroku travel with them now. Anyway again great chapter thx for posting this great story. I look forward to updates and to updates on your other stories too.
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here, reading and enjoying every word you write. (Just having issues with either my computer or the site and having trouble reviewing). This is such a beautiful romance, a truly wonderful work. I loved the wedding scene and the vows they spoke. You are very gifted.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
E-Gahd!!! I have been away from the story for a while and look what happens!! I don't review!! EEEEKKKKKK!!!! Promptly goes to find a wet noodle and beat herself with it. - GOMEN NASI!!! GOMEN NASI!!!!!! I didnt mean to do that!! Offers up virtual cookies and pocky on the altar of Literary Goddess!! Well I must certainly say - WOW!!! Literary Goddess!! I only name a few writers Goddess!! I am truly amazed by how awesome and talented you are!! I think you have captured the essence of Eri prefectly!!! And I loved how Sesshoumaru stepped in and took care of the matter... I was really impressed.. ( the horrid girl probably would have died of heart attack if Sesshoumaru had gone all red eyed and dripping poison claws!!! LOl!!! I thought the wedding promises/ vows were a brillant and exquiste touch!! It was a beautifully written scene!!! I was crying with joy!! How do you do it?? How do you keep the spirit flowing through the story just as strongly as it was at the start of the story!!!??!! Question was Eri there for the cermony itself or was she only there for the reception and if she was wouldn't she have seen the Youkai in their glory? Would she have spoken up and caused a nasty scene? Again I am very sorry that I didn't review any sooner than this. I try to make it my goal to review all my writers whenever there is an update.. I did get to manage to third your story for best romance inu/kag !! Whoot!! I have fingers crossed for you and winning!! I can't believe the end is coming up in another 6 chapters!! WHAT a story this is!!! It sooo TOTALLY ROCKS!!!! I wonder what will happen next? I can't wait!! PLEASE keep up the most excellent work and forgive this inu hanyou nikkie no baka for not reviewing like a good girl.
person Seiteki(nsi)
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww, so sweet. i cant wait to read the wedding...my hentai wants the honeymoon too lol!
person PJ
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I see Eri is still jealous and being an all around witch. Thx for posting update soon.
person RoSharla
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story as well as 'blood and tears' from doggieearlover. as well as some others. please continue this story.
person Inu Hanyou Nikkie
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Another great and brillant chapter!!! That was very nicely done and really touching!! Thank you for this chapter!! I really enjoyed the fact that Miroku and Sango have both matured enough to say they need to leave the group and start their own lives just like Inuyasha and Kagome need to start their own lives. I am glad they will always care for each other. I kind of felt that before the attack with the seroent youkai- her friends were starting to take Kagome for granted again. I just guess they needed another wake up call. I just can't see them all living together under one roof ESPECIALLY with the way Miroku is. That was a really great way you did it. I don't think I have come across another story that had them making such a decision so responiblly- inside a story. Poor Kagome... she has suffered so much pain for everyone. Her heart is so big. I wonder what the others will do to show her that she is very much valued and beloved. I can't wait for the next wonderful update. I look forward to see poor Inu squirming with the wedding. Poor dog boy... he hates so much to stay still.. and that is what will occur with the wedding... I hope he willl be gifted with patience and not lose his temper. Hopefully, with the wedding- Kagome's future friends will lay off Inuyasha ( they do act like a bunch of sharks circling their prey sometimes) or have Kagome tell them to leave him alone. THANK YOU again for this wonderful chapter!!! ANd don't worry about the number of chapters that the story will have.. It is the story itself that tells a writer how long it should be. KUDOS to YOU!!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK!!!!!!
person Chio
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I love your story so much.
person Diane
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like all your stories & am looking forward to any of them being updated. I do have 1 comment/correction, you have a common word choice goof in all of your fics when you use the word, you have preformed instead of performed which it should be from the context it's used in.