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for Emergence

by inufan625

person lithium88
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww... great chapter, as usual. i like the way your portraying the growing relationship between inuyasha and kagome's mother. how they're both sorta learning alittle more about eachother... sorta reaching a level of understanding. it really makes things seem more intimate in ur story. i love it! ^_^ i can't wait for the chapter where inuyasha finally confronts kagome... who is still probably gonna be in a coma.. but w/e! can't wait to see how this whole thing unravels! update SOON!!! til then, t.c. bye!
lith*
person mikah-chan
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing. Great. ah! i love your story! it's one of my favorite's so far, i can't wait to see where you take it!! plz plz plz plz plz!!!! update soon!?!? PlZ! sorry, well you Rock! bye
~* mikah-chan *~
person jules
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The interaction between Inu & Ms. H is so well done. I like how Inu is determined to impress Kag's family. It should be very interesting to see how Inu handles seeing Kag after such an absence.
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! This is one Hell of a story!!!!!!!!!... I rank it right up there with my other favourites!!!!!!! The Lucky Ones by Terri Botta, Any story from DelKaiden, and of course Purity, Torrent and Chronicles from Sueric. You certainy have an exquiste way with your talent/gift. This is truly beautiful. I find the characters to be just about right on target as with the manga, the flowing description and colours you have used to create each scene is perfect, your grasp of grammar is fabulous!!! I enjoy the fact you have brought Kagome's mother into the picture and interacting with Inuyasha beautifully!! I am secretly hoping for a sweet ending with Inu and Kag togther heading down the path of happiness but Not as a straight paved road but crosses fingers as a forest trail rarely used AFTER a very long and hard struggle. Please keep up the most excellent work!!!! I look forward to each update you bring. and in laymans terms.... YOU TOTALLY ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!!
person lithium88
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! ^_^ i'm glad u decided to write this story, i can't wait to see where u take it. anyway update soon!!! t.c. bye!
lith*
person Lithium88
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dances* and so u have returned!!! so glad to here it, and i'm glad u chose to post 'Emergence'. gotta love a good ' inuyasha needs to stop being such a stubborn ass and realize wat he has at the moment*cough cough* kagome...' story. ^_^ anyway..i just found ur story today, so i'm sry about not reviewing the first day u posted...goddamn skool started and jesus christ,it's a pain in my ass... such profanity..i kno.. anyway..... great job with the story so far! can't wait to read wat happens... write on!! t.c. bye (update soon) and excuse my impudence! ^_^ *grins*
lith*
person SoutasSister
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
person IamReven
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I ever reviewed any of your stories, but believe me, you have caused my several sleepless nights. I now have all three of your stories on this sight saved in my favorites. I just finished reading "Making it Right" and found this story trying to see what else you had written. I was really surprised to see that you were also the author of "Belonging Together," which I have read twice.

This story is also off to a great start. Inuyasha really f@*$'% up this time. Can't wait to see what happens. Keep it coming!!!!
person jules
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Another awesome chapter. I just love it when Inu has to realize how much Kag does for him both physically & emotionally. Now, will he really tell her when he sees her again or fall prey to insert foot into mouth disease. Till next chapter and hopefully some more Inu angst since Kag needs a break every now & then.
person jules
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was different. When you gave your synopsis, I thought it would be just the usual Inu insert foot into mouth, etc. Sure didn't see that one coming. So, we have to wait a whole month for Inu to see Kag. Can't imagine what kind of angst that will span. Or head trauma Shippo will incur.

As always, can't wait for the next chapter. See ya Monday and have a good weekend. :)