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great work, i don't see how u can be disatisfied with this chapter, but alas.. i suppose i understand. someone always thinks their work is never quite 'perfect'. i liked it though, the whole admitance of feelings and stuff was a good touch. can't wait to see how it progresses, til then! i'll be waiting for ur update ^_^! t.c. bye!
-lith*

Hello there! Just found your stori! it's Great!! Keep Up the Good WORK!! update soon!, later!!
*!* Tina *!*

another great chapter. what an outcome...kagome forgot how to speak, thou i wasn't surprised. poor girl. i like the way u're showing the soft, sensitive side to inuyasha when he thinks about her and when he's with her. if only he were like that in the damn series.... oh well. beautiful work! t.c. update soon!
lith*

I really like this story
It is well written and thoughtout
it is a joy to read so I look forward to reading the next chapter

This is one of the most endearing chapters I've read. When he turned the knob and saw her for the first time I got emotional. When he said the doctor was stupid I laughed. When she said she was ugly that broke me and when he said he didn't care that was beautiful.

This chapter was a strong one and I thank you for writing it. Please write more like this one. This story so far to me is an orignal from the others I have read. I can't wait to read how her recovery goes and how things between them will grow. How long will it take and will he just stay in her time or will it be better for her recovery if she went back to the past? How long could he take living in her time with all the things so different. Will it be wise for her to go back and have to remember all the bad things but then again will it be fair for her not to remember the good times as well, Sango, shippo and the others she has come to love even if she doesn't remember them in a way? Weird all these questions and then some just because of this chapter. I ask you one thing I'm a sucker for a emtional beautiful happy ending, please give us one. I accepted nothing but great writing in the future from you and you have earn a place in my archive of fanfic stories. I only put in the best ones so be proud you are there because I am.

You are good and I ask that in the next chapter you take a few moments for yourself and take a well deserved bow.

*bows to inufan625*
Thank you again and I will be back... I wish you the best in this and all your stories.

Your Fan (by force ;-]) J @-->--

I liked the gist of the chapter but I got a couple of quibbles.

I don't think girls who have been in a coma for two months have showers. I think they are bathed.

Also, I think it would have been better if Kagome stayed scarred. It's much more romantic.

I did like Inuyasha bossing Kagome into waking up, though.

You ought to be proud of this chapter. The way you described Inuyasha thoughts and how they dictated his actions tugged at the emotions. Inuyasha's and Kagome's reunion was really well done and you captured the charm of their interactions with each other. Good work. Looking forward to your next update.

THAT was ONE HELL of a powerful chapter. . . Chap 5- It was simply beyond words to describe.. There are no words to describe it .... the power you have with your writings.... You truly are a very gifted and talented writer. Amazing... I appluad you with a stand ovation... Damn.. I'm still crying... KAMI!! Genius... we are in the presence of genuis... A true writer.. You keep their characters prefect.. I love the interaction.. I eagerly await your next installmant... Thank you for allowing your fans to read your stories here... Bows... thank you again... and Keep up the most excellent work

Awesome story. i got the chance to read all four chapters today and found it 'Awesome.' i'm actually really awestruck, i hope you continue with this story. it has great potential, and i cannot wait to see how you unravel the situation between the now 'bald, stuck in coma, doesn't remember much' kagome and our favorite 'sad, confused, lonely hanyou' inuyasha. i will be waiting! UPDATE SOON!!! please?
:carryMehome:

very good story thus far. i love the depth it goes to with inu evaluating his and kagome's freindship. so often stories skip ovre what could happen when she's home with all the problems that occur in modern society. the story is amazing. very good raw emotion and great character development. poor kaggers...i can't believe she is bald. i know that is how it normally happens. one of my close freinds when i was in my second year at college was kicked in the forehead by her horse and she was a mess for years. great story adn real great details. keep it up!!