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OH NO! forgive me for not reviewing sooner, school is getting a bit hectic. Beautiful job on this chapter, the progress with the relationship between inuyasha and kagome is coming out wonderfully. you pretty much have all of the characters down to a 't'. i can't wait for your next UPDATE!!! hope it's soon. much love, bye!!!!
~* Mikah-chan *~

I will probably update again after I read your latest chapter, I just wanted to say I agree with your A/N and this is your story only you know how its going to go. So far I absolutly love it, this story it is very heart-warming.

I just wanted you to know you have my support.

Chanda

Chapter 8 was so sad, I cried... I so happy that they confessed their love towards one another.

I look forward towards your next update. Keep upt the great writing...

Thanks,
Chanda

gah!! damnit you! that is an evil cliffy! you have me hanging onto every word like some love-sick puppy and then.. no next chapter!! *begs* please update soon!!! this is one of my fav stories!

Like every morning, I opened up the site to scroll through the titles to see what was new. As soon as I saw you'd updated, I immediately stopped scrolling to read. As always, the chapter brought tears to my eyes. I guess it makes sense that Inuyasha would feel able to express himself better in Kagome's time period and to be less defensive. I like how you're developing the relationships between characters, not just with Inuyasha and Kagome, but also with Kagome's mom. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next update.

So happy to see this fic updated again! I haven't reviewed before, but no time like the present....

This was a very satisfying chapter. You've developed several concrete ways for Inuyasha to help Kagome recover that involve giving something of himself - his time, his memories, even his hair! That adds a real sweetness to the story that isn't just pretty words, but more tangible and more real. I always find myself jolted out of fanfics that have Inuyasha suddenly able to express his love in some witty "you complete me" fashion. He's so much more comfortable doing something concrete than talking about feelings.

In regards to the scar: I loved your idea of Inuyasha being able to heal it gradually with his claws and a lick. Very symbolic of the whole process of recovery that Kagome is undergoing and of Inuyasha using something that could harm to heal. Beautiful.

Keep up the great work!

I have to say, I don't think this incident with the ken guy does anything for the story, you know? It's pretty good so far though the story's development is slowing down. More than a 1,000 reviews and you don't think anyone reads your story?

another great chapter! ^_^ though the whole ken thing had nothing to do with the story, it was a good little 'side-event'. i also agree with you, the 'inuyasha/kagome's mother' moment was one of the warmest, very sweet. anyway, good job with the story thus far, and you shouldn't be worried about reviews. alot of people just read and don't review, it happens.. , but i'm glad u'll continue to post this story. well t.c bye
-lith*

I read fanfictions a lot (here, MM.org and FF.net) but I never thought that good writers such as yourself need reviews telling them how good they are because they've allready knew it, and maybe they felt annoyed that someone little as myself write telling them that, and what they really need is a constructive criticism. You are good, really good, I've read your three stories, my favorite is Making things right. I hope you update soon, because LOVE this story, so keep going, you are good you don't need people telling you that, just read your story and tell me what you feel (is good, isn't it. dam right.. keh). You have a gift.

PS. I apologise for the spelling but is not my born language. I am from Peru

Hey, I just wanted to take some time and comment on your story. I like it... I like it a lot. I hope you keep posting because I'll keep on reading. I know you like to update once every week, but I find it hard to wait that long. So I just have to read your story from beginning to the current chapter like everyday. I hope you write more because you have a fan in me.