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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru loves Rin! He just doesn't know it yet. Heh, heh. I'm enjoying your story and I look forward to your next chapters. ^_^
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you finished posting this chapter! it's a good thing that you are going back and forth with the main characters, giving us an insight into their lives and how they are dealing with the incident that has occurred. so far, it's coming along great!!! ^_^ i can't wait to see what's happening back with inuyasha and kagome! great story!! well til ur next chapter *nudge nudge* haha! cheers!
lith*
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IGNORE THE FLAMES!!!
i have read all of your other stories and i think this one is your best yet. You can really see how much you have developed in your writing (um, minus the grammar, but no big whup). My most favorite thing about your writing style is how you capture the tenderness between inuyasha and kagome - it's really excellent! I don't know if you read the manga, but to me your characters seem to follow in my mind more how they are in that than in the t.v. show, which is good - kagome can come off as a damsel in distress a lot, but i think she has an inner toughness many people miss. Plus, we all know Inuyasha loves kagome, but lives by a samurai-like code of honor; it would probably take a catastrophic accident like this to get him to be honest with himself. I think yo ureally capture this about inuyasha - anyone who has suffered a lot normally does two things: 1. they build walls around themselves and don't admit thier feelings, becuase they are used to the pain or numbness and can deal with it and to protect themselves in a paranoid, fear-of-rejection kind of way; and 2. they do anything for those that they love, becuase it is easier to show feelings than to express them verbally and i believe this carries more weight than just saying it anyway. Again, i think your writing is coming along great - boil any negative criticism down to what the person is trying to say and use it if it can improve your writing; otherwise, tell 'em to f-off!
i have read all of your other stories and i think this one is your best yet. You can really see how much you have developed in your writing (um, minus the grammar, but no big whup). My most favorite thing about your writing style is how you capture the tenderness between inuyasha and kagome - it's really excellent! I don't know if you read the manga, but to me your characters seem to follow in my mind more how they are in that than in the t.v. show, which is good - kagome can come off as a damsel in distress a lot, but i think she has an inner toughness many people miss. Plus, we all know Inuyasha loves kagome, but lives by a samurai-like code of honor; it would probably take a catastrophic accident like this to get him to be honest with himself. I think yo ureally capture this about inuyasha - anyone who has suffered a lot normally does two things: 1. they build walls around themselves and don't admit thier feelings, becuase they are used to the pain or numbness and can deal with it and to protect themselves in a paranoid, fear-of-rejection kind of way; and 2. they do anything for those that they love, becuase it is easier to show feelings than to express them verbally and i believe this carries more weight than just saying it anyway. Again, i think your writing is coming along great - boil any negative criticism down to what the person is trying to say and use it if it can improve your writing; otherwise, tell 'em to f-off!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I missed your updates a lot....and now you send a teaser ..buuuuu ;_ ; . I hope the real chapter 9 will come soon. I love your story.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been looking for your updates for the past couple of weeks and really missed having them. Thanks for the teaser. I was beginning to wonder what was going on in the fuedal era after Inuyasha and Kagome had been gone for so long and also when Inuyasha would be bringing her back there, especially since Kagome retains some memories of that time. This is a really good story. Will keep watching for your updates.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please. I begin to think you've disappeared. This is a great story and I can't wait to see how you handle all of the elements.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cant remember exactly how I came across your story, but Im glad I did. I really liked it. And I dont think Ive read anything else like it. All the characters are true to form, and it is very well written. Hope you can update soon. And keep it up, you're good at this.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic. and I just sat and read everything you've written up to now. Please update soon, I really like what you have done and I want to see what you plan to do next.
Ja ne!!
Ja ne!!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why anyone would complain about this fic. The thing that makes Inuyasha so addictive is not the action, but the characters. I think you have done an exceptional job of keeping both Kagome and Dogboy true to the anime and, more importantly, the manga. I've read both of your other stories (at least twice), and have'nt found an instance where I thought the character's reactions and dialouge were not true to their respective spirits. (OH KAMI, I sound like an English teacher---arrrrrgh!) Anyway, I really like where you are going with this fic, and I can't wait for the rest of the ride.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH! sorry hehe.. but this is ur BEST chapter yet. i would also like to thank you for clearing up the whole incident with ken, it really did do more for the story then i thought.. ^_^ anyway.. once again, great job on this chapter, this story is getting good, and i can't wait to see how it progresses. so until the next chapter, WRITE ON!! .. as corny and gay as that sounds.. t.c., bye!
-lith*
-lith*