rate_review Reviews

This was so amazing! Well done! So emotional and touching. I laughed and cried reading this. Good job.

I find this story different then the other two that I have read. It stared out great til about half way though it.
Then it seemed sad, as if u did not write it. The last three chapters seemed totally different then any other of the works you have done. But over all the errors were a lot less and the story was good. Just seemed as if your heart wasn't in it.Keep up the great work and keep on writing.

Sieg

AWWWW, this story was so sweet. I love how it ended and I love that it was mostly about their relationship rather than the sex, though the sex was good to. I'm even kind of sad it had to end. Good stories always leave me a little empty inside when I finish them. Anyway on with the review. It was very well written with lots of emotion and feeling. I only wish that they wouldn't have had to go through such hardships, but alas they were a necessary evil. At least it had a happy ending. I love how you brought out Inuyasha's hidden personality and showed how he definately has a lot more depth than he usually shows. Saddly it would probably take something tramatic to bring him out of his shell in any case. Anyway it was a wonderful story and I greatly appriciated it and I will also be looking for more works from you. Keep up the good work and dont let any flammers get you down. It really was a wonderful story.

....WOW....and I thought you were good before I read this. So far my favorite chapter is ch.5, the one where Kagome wakes up. Anyway, I love how you portrade the characters, you caught their personalities pefectly and the story is blossoming wonderfully from this stand point. I know this work is about 30 chapters long so I am really looking forward to finding out where its headed. I read doggieearlovers story blood and tears before this and I have to note on how similar they are but from this view yours looks like it will be more about her recovery, where hers was more based on the relationships that and getting past all of that. I look forward to seeing what this sweeter and slower view has to offer. And now off I go to read the rest.

I know this is going to sound kind of weird but...... This story makes my heart happy. Just wanted to share a phrase me and my friends use for really really good stuff. Like when your heart wants to squeel on its own its so happy kind of stuff. If yoiu haven't guessed by now I just finished reading ch.17 and the wonderfully sweet and yummy Lemon.

I've really enjoyed this story.

I also thought I would mention that in the anime at least Kagome's family does have an american style table that they eat at, just like Kagome as a real bed, though her mother does use a futon.

awwwe congrats on the pregnancy!!!

They do not have the american style tables we have... they sit
on the floor when they eat, their tables are that of ... perhaps like
a coffee table's height in american society... it would be a bit
difficult to footsie beneath one.. given that some do not even have
a hollow underneathe. But i love this... Im gnna keep reading now

just thought you should know that.

Such a good chapter again! I loved the way Sesshy delt with Eri! I also imagined the look on the youkais face when he heard her talk such mean things, full well knowing that they were not true...Priceless! Love ya!

Okay, first I have to say that I don't get on aff.net as frequently as I'd like, so I missed the last update. That is the only reason I didn't review that chapter. I read all you've posted, THEN review.

Now to the review.
There's always someone who can't be happy for people in love, isn't there. Love how everyone smacked her down though.
My thought, though is that once Eri gets back home, she'll be mad at herself for backing down and cause more problems. People like that always do.

The wedding was sweet, the reception, too.
I'm glad you didn't spend a ton of time writing about their wedding preparations. In my experience, those who focus too much on the preparations aren't as in love as those who could care less about the small details of their wedding. And these two... Definitely completely in love. SIGH. :)

Glad to hear there's more coming. Don't be disheartened if I don't review right away. Just means I haven't been on recently - not that I've lost interest in the story. As a matter of fact, when I saw there were updates today, I actually said, "YAY!" and clapped my hands. So there! :P

Keep up the good work.
Kashu.