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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY. PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. It has a good plot but you have a lot of grammar errors. Maybe you should get a betta reader or somethin'? I love this paring! Once again good job!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite pairing. the plot was awesome but you had a lot of mistakes. i'm open to helping you with the grammatical error. if you want just email me and i'll help. bye.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story. You might want a beta reader though. There are a few spelling and tense errors. But story none the less!