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for Father

by Xakana

schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Heh.



Heh, heh.



Heh, heh, hee, hee, hee!



Ha!



Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, hah!



AH, HAH, HAH, HAH, HAH, HAH, HAH-AH!



MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!



Heh, heh, heh!



Heh, heh.



Heh.



Mercy! How utterly and fantastically refreshing this text is! Never before on this Earth has so much ass been kicked in one place and at one moment!



This work is nothing less than an achievement, an achievement of the very highest caliber!





person Gyousei
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting ages for someone to do this!!! It was quite well done too. Just wait and see, now everyone will be popping up the whole, 'No InuYasha, I am your Father', twas quite sad at the end tho, was fighting tears like the smushey minded person I am!!

But well done, I enjoyed it!!
person Emily
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HLOY CRAP! I'M CRYING SO HARD IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!! ,,,,,-_-,,,,,,, it was soooooooooooooo good! (i've NEVER cried like this b4) ,,-_-,,
person Raven
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.....that was...wow.....it IS a very good point of view and very good writing. Congratulations
person bd84
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you are downright EVIL! *wipes tears away so she can see the keyboard* that is certainly a new version of the story. *sob* i see why you were so upset when you wrote it! its so SAD! but a really great idea. i simply love the ending! so very emotional and just WOW. heh i didnt even figure it out until the end X.x i'm not good at solving riddles even when they gnaw on my mind.

ok, anyway lovely story - beautifully written. *sniffle* i absolutly loved it! i tried so hard not to cry but the scene with Rin and then Sessh passing is hard enough for me , but then you added that lil plot twist and i just couldnt help it *lol*