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for Before the Harvest Moon

by miyu557

person Dark Slayer
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im very interested in where your story is going?...But it was awesome!!!!!! Update soon
person bob
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've decided i don't like author people anymore cuz they write stories that i luv then they leave cliffhangers....like u do *glares*but please continue!!!
person YoukaiObsessed
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. I’m really curious as to what happens on and before this ‘harvest moon‘. How it will influence Inuyasha.Hope to see more soon!!
^_^
person lady
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all right! great start. but you writers and thoese clifes are a pain in the ass. you leave us poor fulls panting for more so I hope you won't leave us hanging for long.
love it so far keep going.

will k be coming back too hurt inu? dose he still have the beads ? you didn't have her sit him so are they gone because the jewel is complete? is that lady slayer coming back any time ar just the one vist?

that should do it on the ? can't wait for more.
person XZanayu
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good first chapter. Please continue.
person bob
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur so mean......who's the intended?????? ahhh! i'm frustrated i wanna know what happens!!
person kai
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intersting fic! so his intended is kouga, i assume! so bring on the lemons!! XDDD sorry got excited, i like inu/kouga fics, udpate soon!
person kai
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intersting fic! so his intended is kouga, i assume! so bring on the lemons!! XDDD sorry got excited, i like inu/kouga fics, udpate soon!
person YoukaiObsessed
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Oh so the dark hottie Naraku knows what is going on. That’s interesting! So who was watching Kouga or Miroku? Hope to see more soon!!
person sessrocks
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... This whole thing is unfolding step by step andit very intruging. I like how you are going about it. I cannot say much about it for now please update soon so I can write much more substancial reviews ^___^