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for Poison - Teaser

by Xakana

person Anon
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue or else
person senbo-sama
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...miroku's becoming a drugy o0; ....interesting, update soon, I want to see what happens if it really is Sess and what the group thinks...if they ever find out <<
person shadedfaith
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's utterly intoxicating to the point where I can taste a tinge of euphoria.
In other words: feed my hunger and update.

Brilliant beyond words, probably, or that it's 2 something AM and I'm not so chipper.
person sinheart
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! that was fantastic!!!
person dai_yaoi_lover
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh yes please continue! This pairing is growing on me... love the idea of your story & Sessh! I wonder what's gonna happen when Miro wakes up?!? So excited, can't wait! Hurry n update!

~daiyumi~
person Dvana
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Very nice. The bit where Miroku first confronts Sesshomaru in the forest seems a bit off; there needs to me more desperation on Miroku's part, I think, or more delerium/aftereffects. As it is he seems too coherent to be demanding something he knows may kill him. Otherwise this bears great potential, and I look forward to reading this wherever you take it. ^^ Thanks for sharing!
person Raven
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh....this is pretty good...I'll never look at sesshy the same way again
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Miroku/Sessy! (Hopefully in that order... :D ) I'm putting this in my recommended reading so that I can know when you update it - I'm very interested in this pairing, because I just don't imagine it working very well. ^__^ *shivers* Ooh, do more!
person Rawben
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm! very nice! miroku/sess is fun!!! i hope you continue this!
person Tiamat
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That teaser was cruel! Hehe it left me wanting more of the story and I kept trying to hit a "next chapter" button :P