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for immortality

by Chew

person Jazmine
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! OR I WILL FUCKIN KILL YOU! JUST KIDDING. BUT SERIOUSLY!
person Jazmine
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT WORK! UPDATE SOON!
person wishingtherewasashinzosection
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! does that give u motivation 2 update a.s.a.p???? PLZ PLZ PLZ! (srry i hyper)
person Rinlover
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was very good! I have a rin site as well. the link is: http://www.geocities.com/theangelofdeath64/
Rin and sesshoumaru are my favorite couples! I hope that you update soon! I want to see some lemony action! Oh, and your grammer would improve if you proof read it, and change alot of your present tense to past tense. Otherwise, very well written!
person animegirl007
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far...but, question... Do you mean amber when you talk about Rin's eyes? You keep using the work ember.....But, other than that it great .....can wait until the next chapter....