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nice! i love a good rin/sess! especially lemons!! ;)

KEEP GOING!

LIked reading your story alot. nice twist with keeping Rin alive.
I've also read about the belief of eating mermaid flesh, just the first time reading in a Sess/Rin story.

I LOVED IT! it wasn't really a lime though... w/e. just one thing- u made a slight mistake when u said 'her hips looked so welcoming that made his blood boiled .’ srry but wrong tense it’s supposed 2 b, ‘her hips looked so welcoming that IT made his blood BOIL.’ Or something like that- I’m not smart enogh 2 no. BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT AND IF U DON’T UPDATE IN LESS THAN 29 HOURS I SHALL DIE!!!!

good story! you're keeping sesshoumaru in character, which is hard to do in most sess/rin fics. i hope you update again soon! ja ne for now!

update soon please

Mmmm....looks like something will be happening soon.....update!!!!!!!

Konnichi wa, atashi Ren desu!! Tee hee hee, it's a nice story you're writing, I'm interested in seeing what is to happen next, what is going on? Moon mermaid? Face of a female, body of a MAN!?! *Faints* the horror, oh yes, and I also wanted to ask, the kimonos Rin is wearing, isn't it suppose to be called a 'Juni-hito' it means, 12 layers, I'm pretty sure you've watched Inuyasha, have you seen what his mother, Izayoi wear...that is actually called the 'juni-hito' it's a kimono that consist of many layers. It's said that it's layers color pattern reflected many things including seasons, directions, virtues, and elements of the earth as they related to spirits of nature. It looks good on Izayoi, but don't know if Rin is good looking, it covers practically everything, which is almost uncool, not to mention they wear it ALL the time, though it helps in the winter, I feel bad for them in the summer, I swear the males have it easy.

Other than that, great chapters, I liked it, please continue again soon, I'll be waiting patiently for another great chapter...tee hee hee, keep up your great work and I'll always been here...tee hee hee, kawaii, he wants her to bear him pups...@.@

there'd better b a lime and/or lemon in the next chapter cuz' u teased all that reads! but i LOVED the chapter! Sessy cares! YEAHYA!

Well, I enjoyed your first two chapters. Your idea for immortality is a good one, and one I haven't seen before. Your writing flowed fairly nicely. Only a few errors. Good job. Ja Mata!