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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaru and rin make an interesting couple, and i must say i love rins innocence. i am awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A LEMON! YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! (but off spring- is really speeled 'offspring') BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT AND U'D BETTER UPDATE! oh, yeah- *throws coconut* that's for not updateing within 26 hours!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That my friend was a very good and sweet lemon........but quick question????? Why is Rin still so naive???? update soon......
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I DIDN'T KNOW SESSSHOMARU DIDN'T TEACH RIN ABOUT MATING. I LOVE THE WAY YOU DID THIS LEMON!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dat b okey dokey. Dur’s just a few in this chapter- like, ‘I’m scare(d) …..Rin is so scared…….’, and the others r just 2 many spaces between words or punctuations. I suck at grammar 2, and have no idea on how I can catch this sorta thing… w/e. neways----- I LOVED THE CHAPTER, AND I GOT MY LIME, AND I CAN’T W8 4 THE LEMON!!!!! AND, IF U DON’T UPDATE IN 26 HOURS I’LL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (4got meds., srry)
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for you to update. Keep up the good work!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliff hangers!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, sorry for accusing, just wanted to make a point, and also, tee hee hee, it's nice to know some people actually is willing to look up what they are, and know what they are before judging. My cousin unfortunately, doesn't and he said, "Yeah, I know, they're whores..." boy was I pissed. I respect them too, it's hard to live a life of performance, and greatly respect them for it, it's nice to know some one else does, tee hee hee, well other than that, great work, keep it up!!! ^_^ I'll be patiently wait for the next great chapter!!!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffy! cant wait to read the next chap. ^_^
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, no problem, and Sesshoumaru's being selfish, not that I blame him...*sighs* what'll people do for love...funny...^.^ Great chapter, short, but cute, tee hee hee, I don't know about you, but I say, KAWAII!!! It's so cute, I love it, hope you continue again some time soon once more! ^-^ tee hee hee, oh yes, forgot, for your new chapter, if you're going to make Rin a lady, which I'm pretty sure you are, she's going to have to know A LOT of things. If you are confuse as to using some techniques or such, look up what 'Geisha' girls do, and NO they were NOT whores, they are PERFORMERS!!! Sorry, but almost everyone think that they are whores which they are TOTALLY NOT! Sheesh, they're highly talented in many arts and performances, back in the warring era, which Rin is in, women of the court was expected to be great entertainers, sort of, but lady like, with a lot of clothes, like the juni hito crap, and knows how to sing dance and etc. Tee hee hee, other than that, great chapter, love your story, keep up the great work, I'm still here, be glad to review again ^_^.