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June 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Please update & finish soon!!
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey get back here and finish your story, that is not nice to leave us like that we need to know the rest.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i remember this storie ivread it before did you copy this because i remember reading the samne storie just finished
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there my friend, ^+^ How have you been? Well...I'm reviewing to ask why don't you update anymore? You know something, I've been reading on Fanfiction . net and found that your stories are on there. And you know something, I can't review none of them. I pissed me off...roar, but yeah, I wanted to, and I was interested on your two new stories, hee hee. ^_^ I hope you update them soon, and well..keep up the wonderful work, ne? ^_^ Ja ne!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is reli weird how rin is so CLUELESS - lik she doesnt even knoe wut KISSING is..which is kinda lame, she has NEVER heard of a PENNIS?? lik tht is jus...=o. no making sense..lmao. itz cute tho. lol.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!^_^ I liked it a lot. Though it was kinda weird that she wasn't told about differences between men and women. I would have thought that Fluffy would want an intelligent mate as well as a beautiful one.:P
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want the ending!! nice work
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo good story but when are you going to update? you are leaving me hanging. so plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnx.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The vision you have for this fanfic is really awesome, and your style is good too. But the way you made Rin too innocent made her seem as if she was still a little girl and Sesshoumaru was some kind of child molester. Also, you lemons scenes could use a little more work. I found it too vulgar and the feelings of the characters needed a little more detail. But that's just my opinion. But your story is good and this is not a flame. But I think you can do better.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, good work, please continue again soon!! I'll be waiting patiently for your next wonderful update..^+^