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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your plot seems alright, but the story is ruined by the grammar usage. you should really find yourself a beta to overlook your work, try typing it up in a word processor before uploading it, or try to editg or reviseit before you load it. It woudl really help your readers understand your fanfiction better as well as gain other readers.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow there's alot of mistake I mean like every where but other than that in what i understood it's cool......update soon....
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good. update please
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it Please hurry and Update
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?