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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!
i love how shippou is such a little kid haha
too innocent.
^_^
i love how shippou is such a little kid haha
too innocent.
^_^
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was good. And a cute ending ^.^
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy. I loved it.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah that rocked!!!!i love it!!!well peace out
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such an awesome story!!!!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!! Very well done! Short, simple, yet full of all the elements of an awesome lemon fic. It was very quick and to the point yet it didn't seem to be rushed, and that's hard to do sometimes, but you did it, and you did it masterfully. I absolutely enjoyed this all the way through. Are you sure this is just a one-shot? ^_^ I'd love to read the Mir/San one if you wrote (or are going to write) one. haha - afterglow. Poor Shippo, so naive ... but then again he's only a child. There are so many possibilities that you could write if this weren't a one-shot. But it is, ultimately, up to you. But I would REALLY love it if you did continue.
Well, keep up the amazing work!!!! Until next,
~^Delovely^~
(^-^)
Well, keep up the amazing work!!!! Until next,
~^Delovely^~
(^-^)
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! adorable! and... mmm lemon.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
l guess kagome aint a miko anymo
u should consider extending this lemon
sadly there wasnt enough detail in it
u should consider extending this lemon
sadly there wasnt enough detail in it
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!....awesome..........I love it ;))....
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was fantastic! That was one of the best stories that i had ever read. It even competes with Leloi's lemon fanfiction. What an honor! I really liked it, keep on writting!