rate_review Reviews

Um . . . . even though this is a more light-hearted kind of lemon than many others . . . . THIS IS HOT!!!! There's something incredibly appealing about their unappologetic innocence, and it's very true to the cartoon characters. Keep it coming!!!!

very very good! please update soon!!

lol. that's so cute. I hope you continue soon!! :D

this is friggin halerious!!! honest, i've been snickering over it and rereading it for like ten minutes. very well done!! LMFAO. very well done indeed. hehehe...tastes like chicken...the other white meat. lol, that's priceless!!!! keep it up, i really can't wait to see Kaggers reaction!

wow wow wow, love it! Please update asap can't wait for more :)

lol. funny, not halarious by any means but funny.

OK, computer.....2000.00, internet connection......20.00mnthly..... getting to read ONE HELL of story ......... PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes you rock!! I, needless to say, was laughing so hard I was crying..... Chopsticks.... Inu nipples...... Tweaking!!!! All I thought of was Tune in Tokyo, Tune in Tokyo...... PLEASE keep up the excellent work! It is progessing at a very pleasing rate.. not too fast; not too slow and very realistic towards what can really happen between two people who are very inexperienced. Most stories have them either jump in as if they are experienced like little bunnies or are just learning BUT with no "human errors- We'll look back on this and laugh" possible embarrassing moments. I mean how many people can actually and truthfully say ABSOLUTELY nothing even remotely embarrassing occured during their first expericenes with the opposite sex in a intimate setting. I love your story...And you have a great grasp of writing style with no spelling errors that I could see. I look forward to more and hope that you will keep writing these sweet and delightful stories.

Interesting way?

Very nice setup. I hope that there is more to come soon!

There's more, ain't there? Please vontinue--it's sexy!