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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, me again. I checked over the chapter for you and I haven't seen any more mistakes. Good job. If you want me to, I can find the spelling for all the atackes in InuYasha. It shouldn't be to hard, I have one of the movies. Just put the sudtitales on and watch the movie again, and get it that way. Not to hard for me to do. And this way you get the spelling right and not have to go over your story again and put the right spelling down after doing all that hard work. First the typing, then the posting, and then have to go back and re-type some of the words over again. Just thought this might make it a little easier for you. Well, let me know as soon as you can.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! How come you stop it there....UPDATE! Now! :))))))))
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!:D yeah if you could find that i would be grateful=) I have all 4 movies and the series, but they're packed down so...:( i'd be happy :)
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sure, it's no problem. I know what it's like packing, moving, then unpacking again. Done it a quite a few times in my 20 years of life. It sucks after a while. So, i get on that asap. I might have it for you by tomorrow night. If that's no problem for you.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sure, it's no problem. I know what it's like packing, moving, then unpacking again. Done it a quite a few times in my 20 years of life. It sucks after a while. So, I'll get on that asap. I might have it for you by tomorrow night. If that's no problem for you.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so now i've fixed most of the problems, you ppl found here. Tell me if you find any more. :)p
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, your story is going great, but I noticed a few mistakes in this chapter that you might not be aware of, so here's a little constructive criticism for you.
1. Near the beginning of the chapter, you put BAK UR YU UHA for the Wind Scar. Sorry to tell you, but it's not. The right one for the Wind Scar is, Kaze No Kizu. The one you might have been thinking of was The Back Lash Wave, which is spelt Bakuryuha, not BAK UR YU UHA.
2. You miss spelt (though I'm sure not on propose) perverted. You hit the o not the p.
Despite these mistakes, keep on writing, your doing really well.
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1. Near the beginning of the chapter, you put BAK UR YU UHA for the Wind Scar. Sorry to tell you, but it's not. The right one for the Wind Scar is, Kaze No Kizu. The one you might have been thinking of was The Back Lash Wave, which is spelt Bakuryuha, not BAK UR YU UHA.
2. You miss spelt (though I'm sure not on propose) perverted. You hit the o not the p.
Despite these mistakes, keep on writing, your doing really well.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey...I have finished the whole chapter. It's so awesome. Please continue. :) Good Job!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey...you are pretty fast updating the story. I haven't finished read the second one. Good job! Love you.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice please up date soon^_^