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for Always there

by Menomaru

person Sonya
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGLYK. I'm loving this story #SO
person Menomaru
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of i wanna say THANK YOU! for all of my reviews, this is what keeps me going, thank you Putrikagome, for being such a good reader;) And also a BIIIIG thank you to TheBlackWitch, for helping me with the InuYasha attacks:) i appriciate it :D Thank you to everyone else who reads, and reviews my story, nicely =)
I'm still working on who the big bad boss is...buuuut you'll have to keep reading to find that out ;)

Love you all, i'll update soon!:D

/Menomaru ;D
person putrikagome
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Kikyo death or what? lol.....Continue Please...you are doing well...honest...:D
person TheBlackWitch
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I have the requested info for you, not all, but some of it right now. I'll keep looking for the rest of it, but I thought that you would to at least have something for right now. I'll start with the sword and then the people. Ok, so the Tessiaga first (since that's the one we see most.) Tessiaga: Attacks: Kaze No Kizu and Bakuryuha. Sou'unga (if you ever what to bring it back again. Although I don't think that Sesshomaru would like that to much. Having to team up with InuYasha again and all.) Anyway, Sou'unga: Attacks: Gokuryuuha. Tenseiga: Attacks: Souryuuha. That's it with swords, well for right now anyway, I'll keep looking into those. By the way, did you know that a swords ultimate technique is call an ougi. Yeah, weird huh? But it's true. I found that out went I was watching part of the third InuYasha movie, when I had downloaded it onto shareaza so I can watch it til I can get the movie. Anyway, it all Japanese with English subs at the bottom and sometimes near the top, it has little notes of what some words mean. Its really cool. So that's how I found out about that. I thought you might find that a bit handy, for when you can't think of what you want one of your oc's attack to be you can just put that. Ok, enough of the swords, here are some of the charectors attacks, (and sorry no I haven't found out what InuYasha's are YET.) Shippou: Attacks: Kitsunebi. (Fox Fire) Sesshomaru: Attacks: (only found one here) Dokkasou.( I think it's Poison Claws) Miroku: Attacks: Kazaana, and Houriki. (wind tunnel, and sacrid sutras) Jaken: Attacks: Nintoujou. (staff of two heads) Well, that's all I have for now. I hope it helps you with your story.

post again soon
person stegy
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice..
person putrikagome
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You....Why you stop there........? Come on!! Update...Update!!!.....:0
person Menomaru
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey :) Thank you guys for your rewievs and for helping me sort out my crazy spelling *lol* :)

I wish i could make the damn chapters longer, but nomather how i try it just don't want to, buuut ill try a bit harder, after i've moved and all that.

INDEED packing down is noooo probs...I agree with all of you, it's off course packing up that is a real bitch :S He he. But hey! Got to go now, im writing on the next chapter and i wanna update so take care and thx alot! :D

Love Menomaru! :D
person ForsterImag!
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crazy good. Loved it! Wonder who's after Kagome. Is the silent partner Kikyou? Hmmmm? A few errors but mostly great! Update sson.
person amhor56
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I acually thought that this was gonna be a like " Not very good story" But I was deceived. I really like this story. It's amazing. I liked the first chapters with Kikyou coming back from the dead and trying to be with Inuyasha. i liked how he chose Kagome...acually I loved it! HA! Well after you explained and resolved the problems concerning Kikyou, you put a twist in there. Someone is out to kill Kagome! Dun Dun Dun!!!!! Why? I don't know. I have a few guesses though. Shikon Jewel? Kikyou's jeolusy? Naraku's back? Some person who followed Naraku or a friend...I DON'T KNOW! The suspence is killing me here. I hope you update soon and keep up with the very nice work. Althought I wish you made the chapters insainly long, sometimes it can't be done. Anyways update soon and I hope the packing and moving goes well. I absolutely hate packing and them unpacking. It's a bitch, let me tell you. Good luck with it!
person TheBlackWitch
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, me again. I checked over the chapter for you and I haven't seen any more mistakes. Good job. If you want me to, I can find the spelling for all the atackes in InuYasha.