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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun chapter, you know you could always pair Tar up with both Yusuke and Touya if you wanted. Update soon!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story & look forward to reading the updates everyday if/when they're posted. I did notice an odd goof in chapter 9 though; bowel = lower intestine, bowl = dishware, I hope this helps & isn't annoying.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Update Update Update!! I must know if Hiei carts her off to a bedroom and ravishes her body!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh where to begin. I love the insults being hurled about. Chu got exactly what he deserved. Poor Touya, I don't think he quite knows what to think of themnot that I blame him. Yusuke better be careful, sounds like he's about to get his ass kicked. Either that or they are going to end up stripping each other down lol I like how Hiei's staking a claim on Kagome *snickers* Then again I love a man who knows what he wants and sets out to get it. Awesome chapter, I cannot wait to read the next one. Please! Update soon!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mwhaha Go Hiei!! Maybe he should influence Chu to go back to sleep by whatever means necessary and resume that little battle for dominance with his intended *evil grin* Good chapter please update soon!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Begins a nervous twitch* I'm going into withdrawls.. *gasp* must... have... more... Hiei/Kag *falls down* Please... Update soon!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more, this is so funny!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is very cute! I like it! Please write more soon!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. The birds were great. Keep up the good work.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...plz continue...