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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that's gotta suck, poor Tar. Yusuke's going to need to figure out what exactly he wants. If it's just not workingwith Keiko then it's unlikely to be resolved. It doesn't sound like the problem in their relationship is his doing. Good chapter, please update soon.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that's gotta suck. *shakes head* Keiko really is a bit too uptight isn't she. I imagine that "Yusuke" was either her yelling at him to keep his hands in an appropriate area or Keiko could sense the attraction between the two and heard her coming up the stairs. My my now that Hiei and Kagome are alone once more I wonder whatever shall he do to her. Good chapter, please update soon!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like how hiei didn't deny that he was kags man. update soon pleaseeeee
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Yusuke just had to go and piss her off again didn't he. I agree with Tar on her viewpoints of their relationship. Pity Yusuke's got to be dense. Now that the guys have seen the girls in action perhaps Hiei will have an idea of how much training Kagome needs and how to accomplish it. Good chapter, please update soon.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good heavens! Excellent story! They keep popping up, keeping me amused, and this one definately has good humor in it. As well as some good interaction between the charecters and action! Lots of action! I love it! Update soon!
Sayuri chan~
Sayuri chan~
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story i really cant wait to see who this enemy is and if kags will get to meet or find out wat happend to her friends in the past please keep up the great work and please update soon^^
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuske doesn't know what he wants dose he? keiko needs to do away. please update
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how very interesting... Hiei's going to help train her eh? Hmm I wonder how he is going to do that, and if him kissing her is going to be the reward when she gets it right lol I can't believe the breakfast conversation lol Good chapter please update soon.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol damn i love ur charactor tar shes soo funny n reminds me of some of my friends lol love this n ur other stories please updated soon!!