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for To Be Me

by kimisan

schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh now that just figures lol jumping off a bridge to save a snake. Why do I get the feeling Kurama's house is going to turn into a zoo by the time she is done? Hiei definitely seems to be preoccupied if he didn't notice Tar jumping. Perhaps he is trying to figure out exactly what he feels for Kagome. Can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she jumped for a snake? weird girl. yusuke got beat lol update soon please
person sophia
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow nice job! Yusuke got laid!! please update!
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck Yusuke just screwed up big time. Poor Tar, someone needs to beat the crap out of him. Love the citrus content between hiei and Kag.. *pants* Such a lucky lucky girl. I'm envious lol Good chapter, please update soon.
person Kamui
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story...in all honest words I bet you've heard it before but it doesn't hurt to hear it again. Keep up the GREAT WORK I truly enjoy ur story. It's one of the best I've read so far and trust me I'm quite picky about what I read. You've got serious talent
person Leslie
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I just found it so i had alot of catching up to do. I am not really into storys where the authors create their own characters, but I love yours. The girls in the movie theatre is to funny. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool lemon, wander what hes gonna tell keiko. update soon!
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO I gotta hand it to the guys, they are good. Pity Yusuke's seeing right through it. Still, I think someone is in for a very interesting night, I'm just not sure who it is yet lol Good chapter please update soon!
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor tar she must be so afraid of the dark i wonder wat yusuke will do once he find out how scared she is wont he feel like such a jerk. please update soon
person chanda
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you characterize your stories, and your humor; girl you have me rolling around in laughter. Please update soon.