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for To Be Me

by kimisan

schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I hope Kagome doesn't get hurt too badly out of this, somehow I have a feeling she will be though before everything is said and done. Good chapter, please update soon
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh hieis turning protective, is he gonan mate with her? hope so their made for each other. write more please
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh This is great, Yomi's interested in Tar? Sounds like things are going to get heated between the three of them. Hiei want's the same treatment styles is getting eh? Maybe next time he decides to bed her he'll do more than just roll her over and take her lol Little bit of affection will go a long way he'll find I am sure. Good chapter, please update soon.
person sophia
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet! Yusuke has competition! Will this turn into a traingle between them? Please update!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh very interesting plan, makes sense that he should be able to track the dog. Good chapter, please update soon.
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* A dildo named Hiei... I don't know if our fire apparition would be pleased or offended by that idea lol Hmm Yomi's already trying to protect her, even if it was from a snake.. That would have been touching if Tar hadn't chosen the reptile as a pet. Good chapter, please update soon.
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She's going to be lucky if she doesn't get attacked by something being outside like that *sighs* Yusuke really is an idiot isn't he? I think if Hiei's going to really get any further with Kagome he's going to have to figure out what she really means to him. I don't know that she'll be willing to take the chance on being hurt especially after what happened with inu. Good chapter, update soon please
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good, write more please
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Bet everyone in that house is well aware of what went on in that bedroom. I'll be surprised if Hiei doesn't give him a hard time over it now that he's finally experienced someone that doesn't lay there playing dead lol Hopefully he doesn't turn into an ass in the morning when he realizes exactly what happened. It wouldn't surprise me if Keiko stopped by to check on him since he wasn't "feeling well". Good chapter, please update soon!