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for To Be Me

by kimisan

schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, someway they had to have survived, I don't think the jewel would just let them die like that. Can't wiat to see what happens next, update soon please.
person piper
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that Hiei and Yuske need some sence knocked into them. And Kagome should refuse to sleep with Hiei and what was up with Yuske making Tar run by herself? What an ass!
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck this is bad. this is very bad... Hiei is going to lose it lol Let World War Three begin, Tar is a little trouble maker lmao Good chapter, I can't wait to see how this plays out. PLEASE Update soon!
person sophia
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was funny lol wonder if yomi finds taree so charming now. please write more
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks dude!
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww ur stories always make me sad than all happy n glad u have such a way with ur stories to keep me fixed until the end i cant wait tell ur next chapt please please update soon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fcuk, maybe Yomi would be better for Tar. Let Yusuke go back to Keiko, he's an ass. Glad to see Shippo made an appearance, I wonder what's been going on in his life. Though I can't see Shippo and Kag hooking up, perhaps a bit of jealousy is exactly what Hiei needs. Kagome's been through too much already to be jerked around by indecision. Good chapter, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuskes being a major prick, how could he be so mean? she needs to bust his ass like she did those demons. maybe that'd teach him a lesson.
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My my my, I wonder exactly how Hiei is planning on teaching Kagome what her place is. He'd best be careful, it's not wise to piss off a miko even if she does love you. Can't wait to see what he has planned. update soon please.
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love the antics of the characters in this, although I think that Yusuke needs a good beating. I think you should pair up Taree with Yomi...