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for To Be Me

by kimisan

person Sophia
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke does need a necklace, perhaps kagome will show Tar how to make one. Please write more soon.
person Sophia
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEAKS! They almost killed her!! baka baka baka boys. please update.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm the question is even if he opens up his feelings to her will she believe him after what she had heard? I certainly hope that Hiei had the same ideas, what I wouldn't give to be witness to that one. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*picks jaw up off the floor* So Hiei finally got around to deciding he wanted her eh? Interesting.. Very interesting.. With Mukuro there as well. I wonder how this is going to play out with the three of them now. Tar's a bit foolish throwing herself in between them, lord knows with two hotheads like that shit was going to hit the fan. Good chapter, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo goooood! luv how fast u update. please post more soon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm good point about Hiei's dragon and clothing. Why can't he lose his pants? Even just once, I'd be insanely happy. *sighs* Guess Tar isn't going to go for anyone other than Yusuke. She just had to get her heart set on a jerk. meh.. strange girl. Bout time Hiei got off his ass and did something. Now lets hope he doesn't screw it up. Good chapter, update soon please
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much better on the lemon between Hiei and Kags though I'm beginning to wonder if Mukuro is interfering on purpose. Hiei has to know how him leaving like that would make Kagome feel. UGH I can't believe he left like that.. I agree that Kag needs to know what Tar is planning. There might be a way for her to help and neither one of them dies. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls down laughing* oh my.. *tries to compose self and fails miserably* Ahh bet Mukuro wasn't expecting quite such a display of their power. Learn their place indeed lmao It seems Yomi has indeed taken quite an interest in Tar. If Yusuke wants her he better get off his ass and make a decision. Hiei too while he's at it, I'm surprised he is being so.. I dunno, indecisive? Good chapter, funny as hell. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i fell bad for kagome he's being so creul to her. he needs to dump mukuro if he's going to be with her instead of stringing them both a long.