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It's kind of sad that Izayoi so busy being Inu no taishou's whore that she can't be bothered to raise her own child.

I must say that this fic is very good...one of the best in fact. I am only on the 4th chapter and I can tell ya that I am more then please with where you are going with this. Thank you and keep up the good work.

THANK YOU GOD THERE IS A DECENT WRITTER ON THIS PLANET! I haven't read such a well written story since SHOGUN. Your terminology for that era is very correct so I can't help but give you tons of credit. Your writting style isn't like the other authors and that is what makes this story very well written. This story would be a hit if you were to publish it but only changing the characters to your own. I wonder have you the author read "Memoirs of a Geisha" By Arthur Golden, or "The Tale of Genji" By Lady Murasaki Shikibu. These stories are classics especially "The Tale of Genji" since it was the first novel ever written. You have done a great job in preserving Japanese history. I would be honored to put your story on my InuYasha site. www.iylove.co.nr Please contact me via e-mail or aim: Complady123

I like what I've read so far, nicely done! As far as the Japanese phrases (mentioned in your note in chapter 1), that doesn't really add much to the story. It's kinda weird, actually. It would be just as good without them, so don't stress about it. :)