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for Only I Shall Know

by Shady

person Anon
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwe thats so cute... i really liked this... nice way of doing that.
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um, there is so much confusion... first off.. beta!!!!

secondly, why didnt he tell her that hanyou's cannot concieve before she blurted out that she was pregnant? that would have been better in my opinion, it would have added more emotion to get the point of just how much of a MIRACLE that she really was.
person Adrien
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww this story is so sute ^.^ i really loved chapter 2.
person Squirtlezgurl07
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an adorable story! I loved it
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha has black hair and dark blue/purple eyes (according to the color manga) when he is human just like Kagome. So how can anyone tell whose hair and eyes the baby inherited since it would have black hair, etc. if it was conceived on Inuyasha's human night? It doesn't make sense.
person Bill
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I wonder what inuyasha being 100 not counting the fifty years stuck to the tree had to do with anything.
Also I would have been nice if he had to have TOLD Kagome he they couldn't have children.
person kit master
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, just try to add more detail and not be so jumpy. =)