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for All Good Things Must End

by AngeliqueDaemon

person Keba-kun
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O ...^.^ i like this story. I like it alot. I think you did a very, very good job. Arigato for putting it up. ~Ja ne~
person Goddess of Zelda ( My brother and his friends says I fit the name)
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY DEAR GOD!! O_o!!
XD YAY!!! ME LIKE IT!!! ME LOVE IT!!!
Uh...I...I mean...
It was a pleasure reading it.
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice this deserves a sequel It's too good to stop

Arry
person Aphrael
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your story as it was very well written, but I think I should tell you, you really overused 'russet-eyed monster' and 'dark hanyou' when describing Naraku. I know it’s a pain in the bum trying to come up with something other than ‘he’ all the time, but if you only use two other phrases it gets extremely repetitive.
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! NARAKU ROXERS MY BOXERS!! WOO!