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for The Right Girl

by JazmineD

person diego
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey... i like the chapter like always lol .. anyway i hope the next one will come up soon..keep going it great
person Ren
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, I was wondering as to when you will show. ^_^ I'm happy you finally updated, I hope to see another one soon. ^_~ Good work, and keep it up! ^_^
person LaLaMoon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. You updated. Except for a few spelling errors, this really rocked. Bring out another chapter soon, okay?
person Tsadoriko
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How funny.I love the movie BOAT TRIP.This is like it in alot of ways. Update REALLY soon
person diego
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....i whant the next chapter..... :(
person LaLaMoon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have an EVIL mind. But this was just glorious. Hope theres more soon.
person sphinx
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finalli! rin makes her appearance... update soon!
person Ren
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, interesting, be sure to update again soon, kay? I'm interested into what happens next, kay kay? Hee hee hee...^+^ Well, I have to ask if you would please make Inuyasha do something stupid, like strip of the the girls tomorrow to prove they're gay men, hee hee. Or not, sexually harass them, hint hint ^_~ Kagome...wink wink. Hee hee. It would prove to be interesting hee hee hee. ^_^ So yeah, that's all I wanted to say, keep up the great work, be sure to make the chapters a little bit longer please. ^+^
person diego
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.im curious now.. I cant wait for the next chapter ..I hope it comming soon and it a really good Idea ..( the gay thing)
person diego
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it god .. hope we will get the next chapter soon ...and cant wait to find out who stop the kiss...