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for Sesshomaru's Birthday part one.

by Veredrian

person MibuWolf
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was pretty good but it could use a little beta-ing. the second chapter was just too darn short. *sobs* You shouldn't tease us readers like that. Please work hard to put up a third chapter and make it long! Alright then.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm.....sweetie, part two seems to be missing. If you could post it I'd be much obliged. *smiles* Oh yeah, and part one rox the sox!!!
person jokhazen
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey awesome story but what happened to part 2?
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS OKAY. But i was wondering the same thing as Inuyasha, will it be a trap or just a party? I look forward to reading more.