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cute. you had me going, i'll admit that. honestly, i was ready for the end to be like years later they returned to the same hotel just to be there again but i wans't ready for them to already be married. it makes sense though; if some random stranger saved me from some guy who was drooling all over me, i think i would be a litle put off when he nearly throttled him. very well done. the writing style is wonderful and the description is very vivid. very well done indeed!

cute. you had me going, i'll admit that. honestly, i was ready for the end to be like years later they returned to the same hotel just to be there again but i wans't ready for them to already be married. it makes sense though; if some random stranger saved me from some guy who was drooling all over me, i think i would be a litle put off when he nearly throttled him. very well done. the writing style is wonderful and the description is very vivid. very well done indeed!

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very nice! That ending was funny and cute! the lemon was well done, sophisticated without being lewd. nicely done.

very nice! That ending was funny and cute! the lemon was well done, sophisticated without being lewd. nicely done.

very nice! That ending was funny and cute! the lemon was well done, sophisticated without being lewd. nicely done.

That was good! I did'nt expect that at the end of this story...