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It's AMBER not ember.. an ember is a dying flame.

You really have no education do you??? I'm sorry that you have absolutely no imagination going beyond a second grade level... All I know is that you really should get off of Aff.net because sweetie.. this site is for 'adults' not little retarded children who have absolutely no idea what the fuck they are doing.


Learn your contractions and your word forms. It's 'Too' not 'to' and you are missing words where there should be words... makes me think you aren't just stupid but ignorant and illiterate as well.

like most of the black people in my complex.

Here's a big hint.


STOP POSTING AUTHOR'S NOTES

Nice work there hope u finish up soon.. Update please

damn it that was nice, he relly told her of. the story had a sudden start but it dosent matter. it's your story. update soon pleezzzz


Peace & Love BastardOmega

uh this is a disgrace.

what is wrong with you

uh, wow, this is not very well written.. I guess I can see a plot, but you should probably go fix and edit this. You have a lot of spelling errors, a lot of nonsensicle phrases and such. Grammar usage is bad, formatting needs to be fixed, and the over all plot so far needs to be a bit stronger.

I don't think I will be reading anymore of this. But the first chapter i must say is not as bad as the 'second'

Oh, Please finish this story it's good I can't wait till the next chapter

Like Wow! That story was so great u should totally write another one please i hope u do

AY hmm i know ur busy n all but can u plzzzz finish da story im want 2 know on wat happens next in chapter n why kagome dont remember inuyasha?? plzz hurry kk choa!!

Hey this is a really good story please write more !!!!!!!