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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last comment Sango made, made me laugh so hard. Great story.
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice i really lik ethis story
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha this was great!
i laughed at the beginning and at the end
and lovedd the middle
awesome job!
^_^
i laughed at the beginning and at the end
and lovedd the middle
awesome job!
^_^
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was f'ing awesome! it's to bad for kagome that she can't sit inuyasha even if he finds koga and brags!^-^ good luck with more fics!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o... both hot and kawaii... I like.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it one of the best keep writing. email me
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, sweet, hot, cute, funny. "Oh hi Inuyasha what's up" says butt naked Kagome...!! And they may be lovey know but Inuyasha WILL still be annoying, and Kagome on't be able sit him for the next week... he he
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story was okay but it was ruined in some parts by serious word errors and typos. The worst one was when you used the word 'menstruations' (which means a woman's time of the month --as in her period or menses) instead of the word 'ministrations' (which means services or attentions).
Here's the sentence: "...producing a soft moan from their owner and halting his previous menstruations."
So since when does Inuyasha have a menstrual cycle to halt?
I would rate the story high if there weren't so many similar word usage errors and typos. As it is, the enjoyment factor was severely decreased because of all the mistakes. I give it only three stars because of the errors.
Get a beta reader or take more time when you edit/proof-read your story. You have a good imagination, now update your writing skills or get help from someone with good writing skills. I'm not flaming you, I'm being honest and I hope you make an effort to improve.
Here's the sentence: "...producing a soft moan from their owner and halting his previous menstruations."
So since when does Inuyasha have a menstrual cycle to halt?
I would rate the story high if there weren't so many similar word usage errors and typos. As it is, the enjoyment factor was severely decreased because of all the mistakes. I give it only three stars because of the errors.
Get a beta reader or take more time when you edit/proof-read your story. You have a good imagination, now update your writing skills or get help from someone with good writing skills. I'm not flaming you, I'm being honest and I hope you make an effort to improve.